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Fic: It Started With a Mask (1/1)

Sep 07, 2012 21:06

Title: It Started With a Mask
Author: eljay_earthgirl
Rating: PG
Characters: Tenth Doctor/Donna
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Belongs to BBC
Words: Right under 9k
Summary: The Doctor has a surprise for Donna, but we all know a masked ball changes everything.
A/N: Slipping right under the deadline here, but this is a birthday present for the ever-lovely sykira that once upon a ( Read more... )

birthday, one-shot, sykira, rating: pg, doctor/donna, fanfiction, doctor who

Comments 8

her_xcelncy September 8 2012, 03:28:55 UTC

This is lovely! Just very sweet and adorable and I can definitely see the Doctor being so awkward trying to put together something like this for Donna. I loved the end too when Donna pulled up her dress to show the trainers and I can just picture the scene in my head. Great job!

tkel_paris September 8 2012, 04:00:33 UTC

*applauds* I love it! I just love it!

Yeah, when the Doctor goes to that much trouble for you, you're special to him. Certain R names can go suck it for all I care. :P

And of course there's an alien mess to sort out! But at least it'll make the time afterward all the sweeter. :DDDD

Bravo! sykira is one kucky gal today! That's three birthday fics for her that I know of. :D

sykira September 8 2012, 15:03:09 UTC

AIEEEEEEEE! I don't know if I am more excited that you are alive or that you finished this! I am going to wait til the kids go out later so I can get some peace to read it properly and savor it but in the meantime THANK YOU A MILLION THANK YOUS! And chic, how the heck are ya??? Do you you still have the same email? Are you taking over the world yet?!

I can't wait to read this and I can't wait to catch up! love you hon

sykira September 9 2012, 03:34:04 UTC

For not the first time today I wrote a long comment and then LJ ate it and in the theme of fool me once I feel stoopid for not copying and pasting it before I hit post, argh ( ... )

sykira September 9 2012, 04:16:14 UTC

I stand in awe at how after 2 yrs you have these guys pitch perfect in terms of their voices and interaction. Donna's all gobby, the Doctor's all babbly, its snarky and sparky and delicious! And just feels so RIGHT, like this bit: "the defiant tilt to Donna’s chin told the Doctor his answer would have to be honest" or this bit: "The Doctor began to back away slowly, Donna matching him step for step"

The ballet = running connection is inspired, I really like that parallel. And the Homer part had me beaming at the screen like an idiot!

eljay_earthgirl September 9 2012, 04:55:00 UTC

AHHHH I'm so glad you like it! I wibble-wobbled on whether or not I still had it when it came to writing the two of them, but I remembered how much you had liked this story when I showed the parts I had while writing it, and I just couldn't let it sit there.

;alsdkjfsldkjf I'm just so happy you like it!

sykira September 9 2012, 13:48:00 UTC

Of course I do! I love it! How ARE you, hon?!

eljay_earthgirl September 9 2012, 15:27:14 UTC

Pretty great, actually. This is what I'm calling my senior-plus year at uni (full academic year plus first summer session), which is both exhilarating and terrifying. I'm still at the same apartment with the same friends/roommates, still getting along really well. I came out to them and my friend Danielle last year and they've been nothing but supportive and completely accepting and it's been a huge load off of my shoulders ( ... )