Wellll, I could answer that... But then I'd be giving away a good portion of the whole story! But I promise, with finals almost here and gone, that there will be more to come soon!
Sorry I didn't get back to you on this earlier, I've just been a scatterbrained mess. Things should ease off in a couple of weeks, I think. But I love what you have done with it, especially the way he asked Martha about a sonogram (you know she's going to have a lot of follow up questions for Donna about how THAT happened:) and then how tender he is with Donna just before the surgery. But Jack will take care of her. I do like the length of this chapter too, lots to sink my teeth into, and you've handled what could have been a difficult interplay of characters very well. Can't wait for more!
Thank you so much. Today has been horrible, and this just cheered me right up. I'm so glad you like it, as quite a bit was written after the first draft I sent you. The rest of the chapters should be longer as well as more of the story will be told in one setting. I hope the scatterbrain goes away soon!
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Sorry I didn't get back to you on this earlier, I've just been a scatterbrained mess. Things should ease off in a couple of weeks, I think. But I love what you have done with it, especially the way he asked Martha about a sonogram (you know she's going to have a lot of follow up questions for Donna about how THAT happened:) and then how tender he is with Donna just before the surgery. But Jack will take care of her.
I do like the length of this chapter too, lots to sink my teeth into, and you've handled what could have been a difficult interplay of characters very well.
Can't wait for more!
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I'll be hoteling from middle America for the next 3 days so hopefully we can catch up on chat. I hope everything is okay hon.
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