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Fic: Scanning (Echoes of Time 11/?)

Apr 02, 2010 21:59

Title: Scanning (11/?)
Author: eriknannie4evr
Rating: PG
Word Count: 551 & 1078
Warnings: None really
A/N: A HUGE kudos to my first-time beta sykira for her wonderful advice. Any mistakes or crappy stuff can be blamed on me not listening to her. I also want to say that certain things addressed in these two chapters may seem overused and contrived, or even confusing, but ( Read more... )

echoes of time, doctor/donna, fanfiction, doctor who

Comments 11

doctordonnafan April 3 2010, 03:48:42 UTC

oh gosh!!! i hope it isn't something that her mum and dad can't fix! great story! wonderfully written. i hope the next part will be up soon!

eljay_earthgirl April 3 2010, 03:57:33 UTC

Wow, that was quick! Don't worry, things will work out... Eventually. Thanks for reading!

doctordonnafan April 3 2010, 04:04:57 UTC

np. sorry i just like live on this website. is it me or are more and more ppl not putting as many doctor/donna stuff on daily?????

eljay_earthgirl April 3 2010, 04:10:06 UTC

Ha! Yeah, me too. Notice how I was able to comment on your lightening fast commenting skillz with a equally fast comment myself. This com is practically programmed into my internet browser to refresh every minute. And yeah, things have been slowing down, but I equate that to it being spring. :shrugs: Spring has always been a busy part of the year and if any writers on here are uni students, then finals are coming up pretty quickly. Dunno, might just be a lull.

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luinel April 3 2010, 06:32:12 UTC

i KNEW she must be their daughter! But these chapters are so short! /pouts

i'm in the midst of getting ready for finals, myself, though i still haven't written much fic compared to some. My sister (earthgirl95) and i keep thinking that Donna must be coming back at least for one episode because it seems like she was on the set during filming for End of Time too long compared to the screen time she got. Of course, maybe that's just wishful thinking, because we're still both mad about the wedding.

doctordonnafan April 3 2010, 11:27:25 UTC

ohhhh yeah i was upset about the weddinf but at the same time it didn't bug me as much as the fact of SHE DIDNT GET HER MEMORY BACK!!!!! that just made me feel cheated cuz she got so close but noooo her put the defense mechanism on i was like o come on!!!

luinel April 3 2010, 15:19:30 UTC

The thing that bothers me about that is why did the Master trigger her memories? She had never seen him before in relation to the Doctor. Why would her mind have immediately gone to him then, but not noticed any other of a myriad of things that could have reminded her of him? (Say, a banana, or some Chucks). Plus, if she would have gotten her memory back, she never would have gotten married, she would have gone back to traveling with the Doctor probably.

doctordonnafan April 3 2010, 21:20:50 UTC

ok in response to why the master triggered her mind is two reasons i believe. 1.something unusual happened. if you remember she said "it's like this sorta thing happened before" as flashes of the creatures she saw went through her head. 2.she got the doctors mind in JE she said "i got the best part of the doctor, i got his mind" and the doctor knows who the master is so when she became the doctordonna she accumulated that info about the master. in response to ur wedding thing, she probably wud have gone with him but of courrse the BBC didnt want that to happen so they thought "hey lets just keep her as the person she use to be" just so they cud solve their problems. hope that helped