Days Like These 4/? by elizagoth7, R

[elizagoth7]

Beckett put the last of her clothes in the box, sealed it and wrote ‘Bedroom’ on the side. Picking it up, she carried it out to the living room where Castle, Ryan, and Esposito were moving the larger furniture down to the waiting moving truck. There was no one in the living room, so she took the box out into the hallway and began down the stairs.

Comments

[tammini]

She gave him a look. “Mom? Really?”
“Mommy? Mama?”
Another blank stare.
“Well she can’t call you Detective Beckett.”

I LOVED the last line... :D

Nice story

[elizagoth7]

Thanks =)

I don't know how many times I reworked that dialogue and then that line just came outta nowhere, and I was like hmm. It's weird how the best lines usually appear when you try the least.

[divamercury]

Wonderful new chapter! Loved Bunny. My favorite was the couch fake-out, though. I can totally hear Beckett wailing, "It's not my fault!" She was right, they are gullible. Fantastic job and I can't wait for the next part!

[elizagoth7]

I could picture it happening and then Esposito just looking at Ryan with one of those stares that says 'Well now look what you did'. Poor Ryan, my Beckett muses really do enjoy abusing him.

[linnicole]

LOL. Don't poke the pregnant woman. Aww, this chappie was so sweet.

[elizagoth7]

Yes, Ryan and Esposito are learning that the hard way. Thanks for reading!

[merebelle007]

"well she can't calll you detective beckett." oh gosh, that line killed me.

such a sweet chapter.

[elizagoth7]

Thank you!

I think that scene was probably my favorite one I've written so far. There are probably sheep freezing somewhere because of all the fluff that's in that one scene.

[megger_69]

Great story so cute, I loved the bunny part, I cant wait to see next chapter

[elizagoth7]

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you're liking it. I'll try to get the next chapter up asap.

[castleskate]

aww I loved that the best line really was "well she can't call you Detective Beckett" that was classic.