Comments | elizabeth_hoot: Revenge of the Jedi (11/17)

elizabeth_hoot

Revenge of the Jedi (11/17)

Sep 23, 2011 11:07

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Title: Revenge of the Jedi (11/17)

Fanverse: Revenge of the Jedi

Blurb: Luke returns from the crystal cave, and receives his final trial; Leia leaves Carathis for Dagobah.

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fic: revenge of the jedi, character: yoda, genre: fic, character: obi-wan kenobi, character: chewbacca, genre: alternate canon, character: leia organa, character: luke skywalker, fanverse: revenge of the jedi, character: c-3po, fandom: star wars

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elizabeth_hoot September 29 2011, 15:51:36 UTC

Normal apprentices do some Force thing, I imagine.

I did mention the strength in the prosthetic back in Ch 2, but yeah, I could probably have played it up a bit more. Especially since I doubt anyone's going to remember a throwaway line from nine chapters back!

I have a couple of fanwanks theories about how he missed her (mostly based on Vader not sensing him until Luke uses the Force), but this one honestly seems the simplest. Especially for Revenge; in all probability, he already knew or suspected she was Force-sensitive by the time he turned, and first spared her for Padmé's sake and later hoped to gain her allegiance ( ... )

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elizabeth_hoot September 30 2011, 20:23:20 UTC

Yeah, I sort of skipped over Han's coming to terms with things here. I remember noticing that you had Bespin be the thing that convinces him, which I never thought of but makes sense. In ROTJ, he initially seems pretty doubtful of Luke's capabilities, but I assume he'd come around between that and the Endor mission. We never do see it, though.

Maybe I'll write a short story about Han's side of things at some point! He's one of the harder ones for me to write and I didn't want to add another POV or mess with the pacing, but we really should get a glimpse at what's going on with him. Hmm.