Comments | elizabeth21r: Talk Tonight (1/1)

elizabeth21r

Talk Tonight (1/1)

Apr 19, 2012 14:25

Title: Talk Tonight
Author: elizabeth21r
Pairing(s): Tom/Ria, Tom/Bill (if you squint really really hard)
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
Author's notes: Loosely based on prompt #128 by fyredancer. I wanted to try it ever since I first read the prompt. I ended up writing it on paper in a sudden outburst of inspiration after so long. In ( Read more... )

fic, twincest

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elizabeth21r April 20 2012, 23:56:53 UTC

Thanks a lot, both for reading and leaving your thoughts, it means a lot <3

melluransa April 19 2012, 20:16:26 UTC

This was so lovely! I could tell how much emotional turmoil Bill was going through. My heart broke for him for a second there.... I was so glad they found each other again!

kseenaa April 19 2012, 21:08:33 UTC

That was wonderfull. :-) A brotherly bond like no other. It will happen though, one day. I do hope they'll deal with it better then in this fic though. Like, actually talking to each other. ;-)

elizabeth21r April 20 2012, 23:57:42 UTC

Hehe, miscommunication is the worst! Thanks for your comment, and for reading. I'm glad you liked it!

lizz_66 April 20 2012, 01:29:15 UTC

I'm glad you were able to do this. You know I can't read Tom/Ria, but I just want to say that it still makes me happy to see a fic by you, and know that you're writing. ♥

elizabeth21r April 20 2012, 23:58:15 UTC

Thanks bb, so so much. I totally understand why you can't read it so it's okay <3

melluransa April 20 2012, 03:36:03 UTC

Ok, reading it through again... Wow! The pain Bill felt when he left was really well depicted. That warm feeling that runs from your gut straight to your throat, choking your air and making your eyes tear up... you described that so well! And this line "He’s been forcing himself to do stuff just for the sake of doing them alone, of making memories personal and no longer shared." was so amazing! Most of the twins' memories must consist of shared ones. I hadn't thought of that before but it's so true! This really was fantastic, and I'm glad they had each other in the end. And now there is lovely twin love! AND they were in the studio making music. Twc and music making -- two things I love!

elizabeth21r April 20 2012, 23:59:07 UTC

You're so sweet, thank you for the lovely comment. Indeed, twins making music and loving each other is the best ;~; love theeeem :D <3