This was not what I meant to write
I meant to write short, humourous smut. Instead, I wrote this. Not sure it really deserves to be called a fanfic, as it's in my usual "posting random RP-like stuff in AIM to Lakidaa" format
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That is cute, and I liked Jim helping Blair through his nervousness while hiding his own insecurities. And the banter at the end is very realistic.
I think you could turn this into prose very easily. Can't hurt to try, you know?
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I think tomorrow or the next day, I'll come back to this and try to figure out how to convert it. Right now I'm too close to it, if that makes sense. I'm also getting a bit sleepy.
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I kept wondering if it was over and they kept going with the hugs and the banter, so I was a little worried it rambled.
I worry about that all - the - time, but so people frequently mention that's what they like. And, after all, the banter is canon. *g*
They ran away with my fingers!
That's generally a good sign; the guys are talking to you. Congratulations.
I'm also getting a bit sleepy.
Sleep well, and good luck on 'story-izing' your script. And now, I'm off to bed, too.
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I wonder if I can blame my fear of rambling on Tolkien? ...Probably not. Yes, okay - the banter is certainly canon, and very enjoyable, I find, and I like to see it in stories myself, so I should perhaps worry a little less about it.
But not entirely, or I'll become rambling in the extreme, like as not.
That's generally a good sign; the guys are talking to you. Congratulations.
Yay! I seem to do better with them when I let them do this as opposed to planning out a story.
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*hugs the boys*
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