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Dec 02, 2008 20:28

From poisonivory: Give me two female characters in a fandom (or fandoms) I know and I'll attempt to write a conversation between them.

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eliyes December 5 2008, 19:49:43 UTC
Teyla's grip on the hand-stunner was rock-steady as she kept it trained on the woman who was even now regaining consciousness on the ground before her. The blue woman, with unnaturally red hair, who had -- until Teyla surprised her with a hard blow to the back of the skull -- looked exactly like John Sheppard ( ... )

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gaffsie December 5 2008, 22:09:59 UTC
Oooh, now that is interesting on many different levels. It makes me wonder why people could sense that John was not being himself so quickly (since Teyla seems to suggest that it wasn't just because she can "sense" him), but most of all, it makes me wonder *why* Mystique's organization took John. It's a stand-alone piece, but it really does feel like it could be part of a longer story. :)

I really like how in control Teyla is in this situation too. She is competent and she has a ruthless streak, and it's nice to see that explored a little.

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eliyes December 6 2008, 01:47:33 UTC
:D Yaaaay I'm glad you liked it and found it interesting!

I know how Mystique captured and replaced Sheppard, but I don't know why. In fact, he might not be a prisoner at all; he might be on a super top-secret mission... But I don't know. Teyla will get it out of her, though.

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