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Fic: The Price You Pay - Pt 2

Jan 04, 2009 22:21

Title: The Price You Pay
Author: Broedy
Rating: T
Characters/Pairings: Nate, Beth
Summary: Picking up where *expletive* episode 209 left off, Nate and Beth wait to hear Eli's prognosis.

( The Price You Pay - Pt 2 )

rating: t / pg-13 / teen, character: nate, series: the price you pay, author: broedym, character: eli, pairing: [romantic], character: dr. chen / frank, character: beth, type: multi-chapter

Comments 4

les342 January 4 2009, 15:55:19 UTC

Another great part to this story. I love the Eli and Nate stuff, as usual. I also like that you explained why Nate was still in his apartment, when he had moved in with Beth. I actually wondered about that when I was watching the episode. You give a perfectly logical reason that I never thought of.

broedym January 4 2009, 20:51:15 UTC

Thanks. When it doubt, make it up.. ;-)

Poor Nate just needs a hug.

veritas_found February 7 2009, 23:21:57 UTC

Aaand here's me, slapping myself for not making time to read this sooner.

I love how well you can capture the dynamics between the characters; you always have Eli/Nate's relationship spot-on, and you're expanding on this new one between Nate 'n Frank perfectly (and speaking of Frank....oh snap! xD). Excellent job, 'n still very hooking. <3

broedym February 8 2009, 01:19:37 UTC

Aw, thanks, Ver... I love the Nate/Eli dynamic. And I'm starting to appreciate Frank more than I did when I started writing ES fics. :-)