Maybe Someday. Chapter 17.

[elisi]

OK, here goes. What with the parental invasion tomorrow and all, I thought it would be good to post a bit of fic before I turn back into a lurker. I think this is mostly alright, at least that's what kathyh and lillianmorgan have told me. So I'll cross my fingers and hope you like!

Previouslies here.

Oh - and feedback makes my world go round! ;)

Comments

[gillo]

Loved it!

Except - teensy whine here as I put English Teacher hat on: Buffy could sense an old argument raising it’s head. "Its" does not have an apostrophe unless it's short for "it is". [/English Teacher mode] Slinks away embarrassedly

I like Tactful!Xander - where did he come from? And I want to know more about where Illyria went.

We have visitors over the weekend too - but don't get any ideas that you're off the hook! ::grins::

[elisi]

Loved it!
Squee!

Slinks away embarrassedly
Don't be embarrassed! I'm currently banging my head against the desk... it's probably the easiest rule in the whole world and STILL I manage to overlook it when I get it wrong! Grrrr!

Tactful!Xander is a random visitor - he can appear at any moment, but he usually doesn't stay for long...

I want to know more about where Illyria went.
Don't we all? ::grin::

Ah, but *my* visitors are staying for a whole week!

[lillianmorgan]

it's probably the easiest rule in the whole world and STILL I manage to overlook it when I get it wrong! Grrrr!
Now I'm all nervous cos I spotted it in the word file....grrrr!

[elisi]

Well, at least it's a very small thing to overlook! (And have you seen my yummy Lindsey icon?)

[lillianmorgan]

I forgot to mention how much I enjoyed the characterisation in all of this; Dawn's so mature now, Buffy seems to be a bit more intuitive and yet Spike and Angel continue on in their same old ways.
I too am very interested to know about Illyria.
And hey, great changes. A lot more Scooby like now :)
Great opening too, forgot to mention, very vivid.
Yay! New skool Bronzin' *g*

[elisi]

I forgot to mention how much I enjoyed the characterisation in all of this
Oh, thank you! It's one of those tricky things - especially since I've so little experience of writing the Scoobies.

And Illyria... heh, not saying a word! ;)

Glad you liked the changes - all down to your suggestions you know.

Great opening too
Would you know it, but that was written last!

And I might just send some New Skool Bronzin' your way...

Oh - and your icon is excellent!

[speakr2customrs]

Great chapter!

[elisi]

Thanks! :) (And that icon really is great!)

[jenjojen]

Great job! I loved Illyria's reaction. I also really liked how the whole Riley stakeage came out. Can't wait for more!

[elisi]

Thank you for the feedback! And once the parental invasion is over I'll try to put up the next chapter. So only a week or so to wait...

[annabelle528]

I loved this chapter! Hee! Balconies and pool tables! :)

[elisi]

I can definitely promise balonies in the next chapter! ;) And I love your icon!