Comments | elisi: My Immortal 2. Interlude: Secret Santa.

elisi

My Immortal 2. Interlude: Secret Santa.

Jul 29, 2011 18:07

I was going to post this Monday... Better late than never, right?

Before we plunge into the darkness of ‘Children of Earth’, a little interlude. This was originally written as a standalone Christmas fic in 2008, so before I had actually finished the first story (original edition here). I have edited it a bit, and added a few extra scenes so that ( Read more... )

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rabecka July 29 2011, 19:20:22 UTC

Love, love, love the scene with Buffy showing Dawn the card. I mean, 8 lines (starting with "Then she opened it"), that catch each of them perfectly, and made me very glad I wasn't drinking anything at the time. "Is it...” she started, and Buffy nodded firmly. "Oh yeah. No photoshopping." "Wow." ROTFL

Also, Dawn with the stopwatch, Jack grousing about wanting his VM working so he can go blow up weevil world, Ianto/Jeeves and one of the nicer sewers, and...
and I hope you realize that we all want to see that list. Esp number 17. Though I'm not sure if I want to know how the mince pies fit in *grin*

elisi July 29 2011, 19:32:07 UTC

Love, love, love the scene with Buffy showing Dawn the card. I mean, 8 lines (starting with "Then she opened it"), that catch each of them perfectly, and made me very glad I wasn't drinking anything at the time.
*beams* Funnily enough the whole thing sprang from that moment... ;)

"Is it...” she started, and Buffy nodded firmly. "Oh yeah. No photoshopping." "Wow." ROTFL
You know, I'd not be surprised if JB himself actually had Christmas cards like that made!

Also, Dawn with the stopwatch, Jack grousing about wanting his VM working so he can go blow up weevil world, Ianto/Jeeves and one of the nicer sewers, and...
Like I said: FLUFF! Because fluff is sorely needed sometimes. :)

and I hope you realize that we all want to see that list. Esp number 17. Though I'm not sure if I want to know how the mince pies fit in *grin*
Hey don't look at me... Although since it's Buffy's list, I guess we have to wonder what she and Spike could get up to with foodstuffs...

perfiction August 12 2013, 01:44:39 UTC

Awww. This was so fun. Hopefully it's enough to deal with the angst ahead!
I want to know what was on the list.
Also, what's Dawn's policy on sharing? She seems pro-share in this but I feel like that's super, duper squick of her even if Buffy is done with Jack.

elisi August 12 2013, 17:57:12 UTC

Awww. This was so fun. Hopefully it's enough to deal with the angst ahead!
I'll let you be the judge...

I want to know what was on the list.
Ask Ianto. Although I can link to some fics.

Also, what's Dawn's policy on sharing? She seems pro-share in this but I feel like that's super, duper squick of her even if Buffy is done with Jack.
Um, not sure about Dawn. Definitely a no for Buffy.