Maybe Someday. Chapter 13.

[elisi]

I know that tons of good fic has been posted over the last few days, but I'd like to get this out there before the Birthday-weekend. This chapter practically wrote itself, which is another reason it's here so quickly... the next one is proving far more problematic! Anyway - remember that lovely Spuffiness at the end of the last chapter? Well, I'm

Comments

[annabelle528]

I think this is the best chapter so far! You did a wonderful job with your Lord Omishkar character. I love the playful naughtiness between Spike and Buffy! Silly Angel -- why doesn't he realize he's probably not gonna like what he sees? :)

[elisi]

I think this is the best chapter so far!
*Thank you*!!! ::basks:: Although it was one of those that wrote itself. Even Lord Omishkar just popped into being, fully formed. :)

I love the playful naughtiness between Spike and Buffy!
They're very much living for the moment, poor things...

Silly Angel
Oh, yes - next chapter things get *really* interesting!

[kathyh]

Nice tweaks *g*. I know this is a Spuffy story but I do really like the way you write Angel. It's a pity he can't resist voyeurism...

[elisi]

I do really like the way you write Angel
Thank you - I just can't let him be. Poor guy, he's so good at making bad decisions...

[_jems_]

Oh, now I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what Angel will discover!

Loved this chapter too, especially Angel's perplexity at why Buffy hadn't chosen him. I felt it was very in character.

[elisi]

Next chapter is proving awkward to write (not surprisingly) but it will hopefully pay off! ;)

And I just couldn't leave Angel... he's such a fascinating character, I wanted to explore what's underneath all that self-sacrificing hero-stuff!

[lillianmorgan]

Heh. The Red Shirt! The Red Shirt! ::bounces:: And one or two mentions of Darla! And the Red Shirt! :)
I think you did a really great job with Angel, here, very sympathetic but also falling into old patterns of expecting too much, like at the end!
Having seen Buffy dead at his feet himself, Angel understood the pain far too well.
Ouch. Poor Angel.
The demon was an odd greenish murky colour, and looked like he’d faded in the wash... probably a sign of age, as demons were often brightly coloured when young.
I really loved that description of the demon; too often they're just 'in' the story, but you really brought it to light.
Great update! Really enjoyed it :)

[elisi]

The Red Shirt! The Red Shirt! ::bounces::
I couldn't resist...

Ouch. Poor Angel.
As I wrote, I realised that they'd both seen her killed - and resurrected by Scoobies - wildly different circumstances of course, but it's another thing they share.

Also glad you liked my demon lord. I wanted someone with info, but not a convenient White Hat - and lo and behold, this chap popped up! :)

Thank you so much for the feedback! ::hugs::

[madam_rptr]

Oh that was delicious. What a wonderful way to close out my work week. It's fun now to be able to understand some of the references to the show that I hadn't seen before. There are still some that I haven't seen, but it's getting easier.

[elisi]

More feedback! ::bounces::

So glad you liked it! And one of the great joys of reading (and writing) is noticing all those references. There will be plenty more in the next chapter...