Comments | elisi: Maybe Someday. Chapter 11.

elisi

Maybe Someday. Chapter 11.

May 27, 2005 18:55

Well, I've been a very busy bee this week, and so have finished the next chapter already. To be honest it wasn't too hard, since this has been sat in my head for months, just waiting to be written down. And I'm finally getting to the good stuff which make writing a lot easier! :) I'm also sure you want to find out what happens next... only I'm ( Read more... )

my fic, maybe someday

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annabelle528 May 27 2005, 18:35:17 UTC

So sweet! Hee! Randy Giles! :)

Yikes! Buffy really shouldn't have ignored all of those messages...

elisi May 27 2005, 19:12:54 UTC

Never let a chance to quote 'Tabula Rasa' pass by, I say! :)

Buffy really shouldn't have ignored all of those messages...
Heee! No she really shouldn't!

speakr2customrs May 27 2005, 18:43:22 UTC

Giles, Willow and Xander - their faces a study in bafflement and shock.

Woo-hoo!

elisi May 27 2005, 20:04:03 UTC

Hee! :D

petzipellepingo May 27 2005, 18:49:44 UTC

Hee! Randy Giles, the perfect alias. Very clever of you.
She found that she was so aware of him that she could second-guess his every move. All those years fighting - as adversaries or partners - had created an exceptional rapport. That he was a vampire probably helped - her Slayer-senses could always pinpoint him, but when dancing this became something more. She knew that she could have let herself fall at any moment and he would have caught her... she knew where his hands, his arms, his feet were at any given time, even if she closed her eyes The very essence of their relationship is dancing, whether actual or the dance of desire. Now I'm all cranky because we never got a dance on the screen.

elisi May 27 2005, 20:06:16 UTC

the perfect alias. Very clever of you.
Thank you! :)

Now I'm all cranky because we never got a dance on the screen.
Oh, me too - thank goodness for fanfic! There was so much to their relationship...

_jems_ May 27 2005, 18:52:04 UTC

Oh now that was just mean. And pretty darn funny. =)

elisi May 27 2005, 20:07:35 UTC

that was just mean.
Heh. I'm evil! Evil, but funny. ;)

jamalov29 May 27 2005, 20:15:26 UTC

This was a beautiful chapter . The opal as a metaphor of the woman Spike always admired was so lovely .

Dancing..they undoubtedly were breathtaking , and I easily imagined them like this ; the energy , the harmony that bound them together always showed when they were moving : fighting , walking , loving..

And I enjoyed her whispered words of desire :"I just.. I just want you". mmm...makes me all melty.

But : no sweaty , insanely sensual sex for them ??!!
But : Giles , Willow and Xander on the couch?
Oh the return to the harsh reality..;)

And I just read this part before going to bed ...it's just a sweetness.

*hugs you *
*sweet dreams,Elisabeth*

elisi May 28 2005, 13:21:34 UTC

The opal as a metaphor of the woman Spike always admired was so lovely .
Thank you - I've been waiting for so long, wanting to write that bit!

the harmony that bound them together
Oh, yes. I so wish we could have seen them dancing on the show. *sigh*

But : no sweaty , insanely sensual sex for them ??!!
Told you - no smut!!!

But : Giles , Willow and Xander on the couch?
The harsh, awkward reality comes crashing down!

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. And I slept very well. :)