Comments | elise_509: Break in the Pattern

elise_509

Break in the Pattern

Aug 09, 2009 19:25

Title: Break in the Pattern
Character: Shannon
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: 1.13 "Hearts and Minds"
Disclaimer: Not mine.
lostsquee luau: For fosfomifira, who requested Taking a break.

( It was easier to be someone else than to be herself. )

shannon, luau 2009

Comments 11

romelwen August 10 2009, 04:41:05 UTC

Jack would be Richard Gere. But she's no Julia Roberts.
So true, it hurts.

It's such a shame they didn't let Shannon stay long enough.

elise_509 August 12 2009, 23:28:19 UTC

It is such a shame...I really loved Shannon. Even at the start when she was still one-dimensional, I loved her. :) Thanks for reading and for the comments, hon. You're like my feedback constant. *hugs*

romelwen August 14 2009, 05:11:48 UTC

Aw, sweetie! *snuggles*

fierce_desea August 10 2009, 06:24:51 UTC

Love this. I love Shannon, of course, but I love the way you compared her to Julia Roberts in Pretty Woman. I miss Shannon.

elise_509 August 12 2009, 23:29:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I love and miss Shannon too, I wish I wrote her more and saw her pop up in other fic more too.

aurilly August 10 2009, 13:27:04 UTC

I love this! I love Shannon and fics written in this narrative POV style, because she's so much fun. aLL THE pRETTY Woman analogies were brilliant.

elise_509 August 12 2009, 23:31:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I thought it seemed like Shannon to think about herself in relation to something like a movie like that, it seemed like something a girl her age and background might do. I'm glad you liked that. :)

tellshannon815 August 10 2009, 21:11:30 UTC

I miss Shannon! This was totally IC, love it!

elise_509 August 12 2009, 23:31:19 UTC

I miss her too! I'm glad you liked this, that's so nice of you. :)

siluria August 10 2009, 21:45:24 UTC

Awww! I do miss Shannon... well the later Shannon anyway, and so I really like the idea of her starting to shed some of those veneers!

elise_509 August 12 2009, 23:32:08 UTC

I miss Shannon a lot. I loved watching her grow but still have something about her that was inherently her. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)