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elise_509

If It Were Me

Jul 31, 2008 19:37

Title: If It Were Me
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer, Jack/Juliet
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: 3.17 “Catch-22”
Disclaimer: Not mine.
lostsquee luau: For alemyrddin, who requested massages and Jack/Sawyer.

( From where Sawyer sits, he can see that her touch simply has to be too light to register any effect. )

luau 2008, jack/juliet, jack/sawyer

Comments 18

phoenixjustice August 1 2008, 15:14:22 UTC

ooh this was so lovely! (But the Jawyer lover in me hopes for a sequel where Sawyer gets his man. XD) I loved this, I hope you'll write somemore Jawyer again--yours is still my favorite. =D

elise_509 August 3 2008, 02:43:00 UTC

thanks so much, hon! esp. your words about wishing I'd write more jawyer, that's so sweet of you. I seem a bit iffy on writing jawyer lately, I don't know why. I still love them of course, the plot bunnies just aren't there. :\ Maybe soon I'll get something! :)

phoenixjustice August 4 2008, 14:32:56 UTC

You're more than welcome! Well, maybe you just need to re-watch the earlier LOST seasons when the Jawyer was so much more blatant? =D

gottalovev August 1 2008, 16:59:28 UTC

your Sawyer, disgusted at how Juliet lacks good massaging skills? is perfect. I wonder why she did not combust from the death glare he surely threw her way. that was AMAZING even if I want to pet poor Sawyer, all wrapped up in his jealousy. well yes. I might find it AMAZING because of that jealousy. ;) anyway.

One day, Jack will understand and get the massage to end them all *nods*

elise_509 August 3 2008, 02:44:19 UTC

oodles of thank yous, lou! :) I'm glad that you liked Sawyer's jealousy and his death glare at Juliet. I like writing him jealous, it's enjoyable to do. Maybe someday Jack will get his good massage from someone who knows how. You never know! ;)

*hugs*

elliotsmelliot August 1 2008, 23:29:21 UTC

This is delightful. Sawyer's characterization of Juliet caused me to snicker because I used to think of her the same way. At first I thought he was just over confident because Jack was his but I loved the idea of him still not figuring out how to get Jack and practically exploding with jealously.

elise_509 August 3 2008, 02:45:29 UTC

Hee, I'm glad Sawyer's POV on Juliet gave you a grin. I enjoy writing this version of Sawyer, who wants Jack but is stewing internally over it and acting out rather than doing anything about it, he's like an angsty teenager or something. lol. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and commenting. *hugs*

janie_tangerine August 6 2008, 14:27:34 UTC

You did such a great job with this, one could feel Sawyer's jealousy all the way. I loved how you described the massage he would have given Jack and I love how much sense it makes with Sawyer's behavior in general. Now I suggest a threesome though, with many massages between those three all, and Kate can go fishing ;)