Comments | elise_509: Same Deep Water As You

elise_509

Same Deep Water As You

Jul 21, 2008 16:32

Title: Same Deep Water As You
Characters: Juliet, Jack
Ratings: PG
Spoilers: 3.01 “A Tale of Two Cities”
Disclaimer: Not mine.
lostsquee luau: For astra2104, who requested Ice

( If Juliet were to catalog all that she felt yesterday, a long list of synonyms for dead would’ve sufficed. )

juliet, luau 2008, jack

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elise_509 July 22 2008, 02:50:44 UTC

omg yay! i love enthusiastic feedback like this. i saw your first two lines and was grinning already. :) I love that episode too, if only for the introduction of Juliet.

Thanks for such kind words about this little fic! I really loved the reawakening that Jack brings about in Juliet; he was kind of the spark that really set off the fire that was ready to burn.

*hugs*

astra2104 July 21 2008, 21:31:20 UTC

Ohhhhh!!
Now I've been reading all of your ficlets and finally there's mine and wow, it's so good (and of course it's way better than all the others, but then again, I'm biased)

very clever use of the prompt, hon - I haven't even thought of that scene in a long time!

Thank you so so much for this! ♥

elise_509 July 22 2008, 02:52:29 UTC

It worked out so perfectly that you'd end your catch-up spree on the fic I wrote for you! It was meant to be, my dear. :) And I'm thrilled that you liked my offering. Ice has always been linked to Juliet for me so she was the first person I thought of - I'm glad you still enjoyed it even if it wasn't Sawyer driving Jack crazy with ice cubes. ;)

*glomps*

janie_tangerine July 21 2008, 21:53:52 UTC

I loved your take on the prompt here! This was an awesome character study. Everything totally fits with the episode and does indeed tie seamlessly. The imagery was perfect and I loved that Jack managed to snap her out of it even when it was like, the second time they saw each other. The last line was a killer. I really liked this one ;)

elise_509 July 22 2008, 02:54:09 UTC

Thanks so much, hon! I love that episode and how cool and calm she is compared to how snapped Jack is. It's so clear that he gets to her almost immediately, I love that. I'm glad you thought I captured some of that. *hugs*

prettybutt July 21 2008, 22:20:47 UTC

this is awesome Laur ♥

elise_509 July 22 2008, 02:55:48 UTC

your icon is so hilarious, btw, esp. Des' accent conveyed via icon. lol.

glad you liked this! jacket smut is next on the agenda now that I got my SPN sexin' finished finally!

angelcure July 21 2008, 22:28:13 UTC

It's a Cure song! The Same Deep Water as You ;)

Very nice little story!

elise_509 July 22 2008, 02:57:34 UTC

Yep!!! It's funny, because I Am Kloot has a song titled Same Deep Water as Me, and that's what I originally named this, and then I decided, No, I'm going to use the Cure title instead. I liked the "you" better than "me". lol.

glad you liked the story! :)