Comments | elise_509: Change of Mind

elise_509

Change of Mind

Jul 12, 2008 15:05

Title: Change of Mind
Characters: Jack, Sawyer, Kate
Rating: PG
Spoilers: 4.13/14 “There’s No Place Like Home”
Disclaimer: Not mine.
lostsquee luau: For siluria, who requested Jack and Sawyer.

( Jack ignores them with all his might for as long as he can. )

luau 2008, jack, sawyer

Comments 22

siluria July 12 2008, 20:36:13 UTC

Oh....! Perfect, but then your Jack always is! :) I love it, thank you xxxxx

elise_509 July 12 2008, 23:10:10 UTC

Thanks babe! I'm glad you liked it. I know it's not exactly friendshippy, but my muse is being a little uncooperative lately, wanting to angst like nobody's business. ;)

janie_tangerine July 12 2008, 21:00:53 UTC

First of all, your icon made me fall off the chair or something *cracks up*.

Second, this was lovely. I absolutely love that Jack cracks only when he sees Sawyer and how IC was Kate's reaction. And that Jack buys what Locke says because of Sawyer and not for anything else, it really fits. *sigh* I really liked it! And no, Kate doesn't need to know, I guess she needs to see with her own eyes when they do fix the situation ;)

elise_509 July 12 2008, 23:12:19 UTC

Isn't that icon the best? orangesky7 made it. It so expresses exactly how I feel about the triangle at heart.

I could see Sawyer showing up, and Jack knowing that meant Sawyer was dead, as the breaking point where it just gets to be way too much for Jack to handle, where he's ready to just do anything to make it all go away. I'm glad that you liked that part of it. *hugs*

invisiblelove July 13 2008, 01:03:03 UTC

Ooh, lovely drabble <3 I loved how it was kind of eerie and twisty and very in keeping with the Lost-y vibe! Great stuff!!

elise_509 July 14 2008, 21:12:29 UTC

thank you so much babe! i think one of the problems I've been having writing S4 fic is that I don't consider myself very good at the twisty, creepy LOST stuff, so I'm happy that you thought this succeeded. :)

elliotsmelliot July 13 2008, 05:02:50 UTC

You only took a few words to describe something so epic. I felt by the end I had just watched an entire episode because you hit all the emotions here necessarily to convey the whats and the whys.

elise_509 July 14 2008, 21:13:03 UTC

wow, thank you so much for that! that's such a kind thing to say, i really appreciate that. *loves*

haldoor July 13 2008, 06:07:00 UTC

Ooh, I like! Thanks, love! Very subtle, but the less is more approach works so well here! ;-)

elise_509 July 14 2008, 21:13:52 UTC

thank you! :) trying to keep these luau fics from going too long prompts me to try some less is more stuff more often than I usually do. I'm glad you liked how this one worked. *hugs*