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elise_509

Patience

Jan 31, 2008 18:07

Title: Patience
Pairing: Jack/Juliet
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Post-Island AU, Vague S3 mentions.
Disclaimer: Not Mine!
Prompts: For get_jackoff #8, Hospital Scrubs, and prettybutt’s prompt Medical Incredible
A/N: Laura, this is unabashed porny schmoop. Hope you like it!

( It’s strange how even now, months after leaving the island, his first instinct is always panic. )

jack/juliet

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elise_509 February 2 2008, 08:23:20 UTC

Wow! I don't even know what to say, you are so sweet and kind! Thank you so much! I was having a hard time getting back into the swing of writing both Jack/Juliet and het porn, so I was actually really scared of how this would go over. It really means a lot to me that you think so highly of it, it really does. *hugs you*

I would not mind at all if you friended me, in fact I would be delighted! I actually have been meaning to ask if I could friend YOU, because I've been loving your fic so much. I just saw you finished a long series so soon as I have a chunk of time where I can sit down and read it all the way through, it's the first thing on my list to do. :)

Thank you again for reading and for your feedback! :)

prettybutt February 1 2008, 20:52:32 UTC

yeaaaa for your jack/juliet fic!! i love the pace of this, of them in this rather--he is just sooo sweet and tender to her...my favorite part was the thud against the wall of course. You are such a talented writer-you give such vivid detail it's better than watching the show. great job, thank you so much for this!!

elise_509 February 2 2008, 08:25:25 UTC

it's so funny because I always write Jack soooo sweet and tender in het fic. He's like the world's most perfect man. Then I get him with Sawyer and he's talking dirty and fucking him every which way he can. LOL! And I'm always having jack slam people into walls. I'm so glad that you liked this, babe, and thanks for reading and for your compliments! Thanks for setting up those prompts and getting me to write this - I really needed to get back into writing them and this gave me the perfect opportunity. *hugs*

aliasledger February 3 2008, 00:22:09 UTC

OH MY GOD. This was so so good.
Sweetie don´t worry, because your writing is still so awesome. I have been reading all your fics lately, iorwen107 (sarah) gave me your l.j link and I love it. LOL.

This fic was really sexy/hot/smut/beautiful/sweet to read, and sure one of my fauvorites from J/J fanfiction. I like "reality" and "adrenaline" a lot as well. ♥

And I agree with Laura, this is much better than watching the show.

*hugs*
lu.

elise_509 February 4 2008, 21:23:47 UTC

Aw, that was nice of Sarah to pimp me to you. I'll have to make sure to thank her for that. She's so awesome. :)

I'm so glad that you're enjoying my fic! I've been away from writing it for so long, I definitely feel rusty, but I think I'm getting back into the swing of things. Thanks for saying you feel like it's still going okay. ;) And thank you for your kind compliments on this fic and on my other J/J fic! That means a lot.

*hugs*

aliasledger February 4 2008, 21:46:58 UTC

You are very wellcome.
they are really awsome ♥

janie_tangerine February 6 2008, 12:59:24 UTC

So, Nc17 Jack/Juliet. *dies* first of all, much love for the salmon scrubs. More seriously, this is probably one of the few het pairings I really like on show and that was terrific. I loved how comfortable (and not-so-angst) they were around each other and how you notice that there has been kind of a building up to it even if it wasn't actually shown. Great setting too and your Juliet is kinda perfect.

There’s a relaxed ease in his usually tense shoulders and he moves languidly. She has a feeling that all of his co-workers and interns down in surgery aren’t going to know what to do with themselves today when he returns, happy and laid-back instead of tense and serious.

They're so going to freak out.. ;) great fic!

elise_509 February 6 2008, 17:12:16 UTC

Thank you so much, darlin'! You're too sweet. I really like Jack and Juliet together...they are really fun to write, especially off island where I can give them a relatively angst-free love life. Because I feel that if Jack and Juliet were to give it a go post-island, it would be a lot less angsty than say, Jack and Kate. I don't see the angst ever really ending for them.

Relaxed!Jack would totally freak people out. When was the last time we saw him really relaxed on the show? When Kate drugged him? And that doesn't even really count.

lady_e2484 February 9 2008, 16:21:03 UTC

Weeeeeeeeeeeeee I loved this !!!

It's been way to long since I've read one of your fics missy :D Good to see your still on top form as always me dear XD lol

I loved that it was smutt (Jacket against the wall *THUD*) but it was also tender and sweet too, and I can just picture Jack all happy and flushed in a post-coital state now, he'd be soooooo cute :D

Awsome stuff babes ;)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

elise_509 February 12 2008, 04:50:55 UTC

Thank you so much! It's been awhile since I've written any fic, especially het fic, and even moreso Jack and Juliet! It was nice to come back to them and sex them up, let them have some happy against-the-wall sex. :) Any time I can get Jack to put anyone, male or female, against a wall, I will do it. ;)

Thanks for reading and for your compliments, sweetie! *hugs*