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elise_509

Bluffs & Tells

Dec 23, 2006 00:21

Jack!Fic Advent Calendar
24_days_of_jack - December 23rd

Title: Bluffs & Tells
Characters: Jack, Sawyer, Hurley, Kate
Pairing: Jack/Kate or Jack/Sawyer, but only if you squint really hard!
Rating: PG
Prompt: foxys40 #26, Leader
Spoilers: Through 2x17 “Lockdown”
Disclaimer: Not Mine!

( “Sawyer, would you give it a rest? God, you're a sore loser.” Kate admonishes him and Sawyer sends a glare her way, annoyed. )

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Comments 8

pilot101 December 23 2006, 15:07:11 UTC

That was so nice and sweet. A lovely moment that could slip straight in to season two. God I miss that season now. lol

You got all the dynamics spot on. The Jack/Kate and Jack/Sawyer interactions were just perfect. Hurley was perfect too..... Okay, It was all perfect. :D

Jack/Kate or Jack/Sawyer, but only if you squint really hard!
Oh I can squint that hard. You so know Sawyer is a fan of the man giggle. ;)

elise_509 December 24 2006, 16:48:07 UTC

thank you thank you! :) that means a lot. i miss S2 now too. Which is funny, b/c during it I was all, "god, I miss S1, S2 isn't as good!". Makes me wonder if during S4 I'll be wishing for S3.

Hee! I'm glad you could squint that hard. Sawyer sooo loves the mangiggle!

prettybutt December 24 2006, 04:29:52 UTC

ok that was incredibly adorable Laur-all of them were so cute, but picturing card shark confident Jack always gets me all hot and bothered. Loved Jack's giggle and Sawyer's reaction *smirk. Great story sweetie ♥

elise_509 December 24 2006, 16:49:02 UTC

card shark!Jack is so hot. :) Glad you liked the story, babe! Jack's man giggle...did you see Foxy on Kimmel? Man giggles galore!!! :)

*loves you*

lady_e2484 December 24 2006, 16:45:31 UTC

Loved it hun :)

A nice and sweet one and loved sawyers reaction to the man giggle :) lmao

elise_509 December 24 2006, 16:50:08 UTC

thank you very much! :) i just wanted to put out something nice and light and fluffy, non-angsty after all the :( fic I've put out over the last 24 days! I'm glad you liked it. *hugs*

speedcat93 December 27 2006, 16:33:04 UTC

I really don't have to squint that hard! Only that line is enough for me "Sawyer bites his lip because he almost laughs too, not because of what Hurley said but because Jack's giggle cracks him up completely".That was so sweet and so angstless (can we say that?, sorry bad english...). Loved all the characters interaction. Thanks for sharing, bye!

elise_509 December 28 2006, 03:53:06 UTC

hee, angstless! that's what I was going for in this little ficlet. something lighthearted instead of the dark stuff I've been writing. But ironically, hardly anyone read it! lol. I guess angst does go over better! But you read it and I lovelove you for that!

Sawyer loooves the man!giggle! don't we all? :)

*hugs* Thanks for the fb, babe!!!