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elise_509

Distraction

Dec 20, 2006 12:11

Jack!Fic Advent Calendar
24_days_of_jack - December 20th

Title: Distraction
Characters: Jack
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: foxys40 #30, Real
Spoilers: Spec on 3x09
Disclaimer: Not Mine!

( Even through the haze of smoke and alcohol, it still cuts deep like a sharp jagged knife. )

jack

Comments 25

prettybutt December 20 2006, 17:28:43 UTC

*shields eyes
fyi i am SOOO excited to read this, but if i don't leave now to run my errands i am a dead woman. Expect worship later ♥

prettybutt December 20 2006, 20:15:06 UTC

I didn't think it was possible, but you have somehow made me even more psyched for Jack in Thailand. This is how i picture things-Jack at his lowest there, drinking, trying to escape, trying to change-to be the guy who doesn't care. I'm already trying to prepare myself for that moment when Jack gets his heart taken out and stomped on by another woman. So sad, but i live for this stuff-you did wonderful with this laur-
It may be okay for some people, Jack, but not for you. Mentioning that made this perfect, and i hope the show somehow reminds the audience of the warning, but they won't lol. you and your awesome fics are love ♥

elise_509 December 20 2006, 20:44:57 UTC

How were your errands? The only good thing about errands is when you get them all done and feel like you've accomplished something. :)

I made you more psyched for Thailand Jack!Back? Woo! That's so cool. I don't know how I could be more excited for it myself - maybe if somehow it was discovered the Bai Ling was a big liar and isn't on the show at all...that could increase the excitement. It's an unfair world when a ho like Bai Ling gets to have pretend!sex with Foxy.

I'm glad you liked me bringing back Christian's line from THP. I thought it probably will work well with whatever Jack does while he's in Thailand, because he's definitely trying to be someone he's not. Poor Jack...

Thanks for the lovely lovely fb! You rock my world more than anyone else in it! :)

prettybutt December 20 2006, 20:58:18 UTC

i did accomplish something-Yea! LOL
I really am the only person not that upset over Bai--seriously-we get half naked foxy, and jack finally gettin' some-that is more than enough for me. *love you like i love my dreidel

Thread 9

ermer00 December 20 2006, 17:46:47 UTC

*sighs happily* So many hot things in this fic. Jack in Thailand, Jack getting tats, Jack screwing some random female.

Oh this has got me so ready for the thailand flashback. I'm preparing myself to be underwhelmed though because the writers will probably mess it up like they usually do.

*loves you more than chocolate* (I think) :D

elise_509 December 21 2006, 09:59:30 UTC

Thank you! More than chocolate (maybe) is a great compliment! Chocolate...hmmmm...

I'm so ready for the Thailand Jack!Back, I can barely contain myself. It's going to be so awesome!

angelcure December 20 2006, 18:10:37 UTC

This is so close to what I think the Thailand flashback will be. Yet another woman who couldn't care less about my dear boy. Yet another woman we won't be able to forget. Yet another reason for him to hurt.

I didn't want it to be like this. I wish he could be happy. But that's so difficult for him, because he cares so much.

I love this fic and, I seriously should stop reading them at work, because I'm all hot now! LOL!!!

elise_509 December 21 2006, 10:00:31 UTC

Poor Jack. I know this mystery Thai woman is going to crush him again, from what it sounds like. Can't Jack ever get a nice girl who treats him right???

Glad I could brighten your work day. ;) Thanks for reading and for the fb, sweetie!!!

angelcure December 21 2006, 19:03:41 UTC

Yeah, definately. I need to fly over to the Island and take care of that. Jack needs someone who'll be nice to him, so, I guess I could do him this 'favour'. It's just out of charity, you know? Just because I have a great heart and the man needs some loving! LOL!!!

Hey, you've been brigthening my works days ever since I started reading your fics! It's such a nice and welcome break from all the Biology stuff!

*hugs*

elise_509 December 22 2006, 03:10:44 UTC

Jack needs someone who'll be nice to him, so, I guess I could do him this 'favour'. It's just out of charity, you know?

Oh yes, you brave soul you, sacrificing yourself all in the name of kindness. Must be rough, that task. ;) Could I help too? Pretty please?

Hey, you've been brigthening my works days ever since I started reading your fics!

awww, thanks! you're so sweet! *hugs back*

Thread 5

gigglemonster December 20 2006, 21:49:23 UTC

ooooh my word!

i LOVED it...especially like comparison to jack being like a blank canvas for this woman

i hope this is what the real show is like -- tee hee...
lots of jack just being unbelievably hot without a shirt on! it sounds like the perfect storyline to me :)

I'm soo sad that christmas is coming because now there will be no more advent calender fics to read!! :(

elise_509 December 21 2006, 10:02:02 UTC

Jack without his shirt on is always a good thing.

If they show him getting tattooed on the show, I think I'll die. It will be too much for my heart to handle.

It's going to be weird for me not to post a fic a day! I'm glad it's going to be over though. Back to normal fic for me!!! I'm thrilled you've liked it though, that means a lot to me!!! :)

lady_e2484 December 20 2006, 23:14:32 UTC

LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!

I swear i am nearly jumpin outta my skin with excitement for Jack in Thailand (insert 500 eager smilies lol)

And my god was this hot ****thud****

elise_509 December 21 2006, 10:02:37 UTC

:) Thank you! Jack in Thailand...I can't wait for it. It's going to be so hot. I'm glad this was hot enough for you in the meantime. *hugs*