Forgiveness - Olivia/Peter

[elialys]

Title: Forgiveness

Spoilers: Up to 3x09 'Marionette'.

Rating: K? T maybe, for the content?

N/A: This is something I've had in my head for days now, and I just had to write it down, especially after 'Marionette'. How HEARTBREAKING and gorgeous was this episode? Anna Torv and Josh Jackson…seriously guys, you're killing me with your awesomeness.

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Comments

[syd15]

YOU ARE KILLING ME HEREEEEEEEEEE!!!

Obviously, this is another one I can't read just yet arrrgggg

[elialys]

ISN'T IT SCREAMING TO YOU: "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATCH THEM!!!"

XD

Seriously, I think I'm waiting just as impatiently to read your reaction to all those episodes hahaha!!

Isn't your sister back yet? Is she torturing you?

[syd15]

IT IS SCREAMING AT ME BUT SO LOUDLY I CAN BARELY HEAR ANYTHING AT ALL

XDDD

Oh, no, she's home but today was chaotic (I haven't sleep in like 28 hours and I can't watch Fringe like this). Here it's now 4 am so I think I'm going to bed.

[cifan70]

OMG, I don't read fic but this one screamed to me. *read me* It sucked me in. It's really good. Good Lord, I want this so much.

[elialys]

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I feel honored that you chose to read it anyway!! I don't think I could survive all the angst + the hiatus right now without fanfics haha!

[i_like_neon_ice]

Ahhhh I saw this on Tumblr (and I'm fairly new to that site so I'm not sure how to respond) so I thought I'd find your LJ and post my response here. (I'm ellementira on Tumblr, by the way. Different sn can be confusing)

LOVED this fic! ♥ You so beautifully put into words what I can only hope will happen. I love the rain/blood imagery you used, and how you addressed the fact that the first time they will be together she might mirror Altlivia's behaviors and Peter will instinctively think of her.

Thanks for writing this! I definitely needed it after this week's episode!

[elialys]

Thank you so very much!!

I actually didn't think about Olivia mirroring Altlivia's behavior until I had her straddling Peter and I was like "Waiiiit a sec, isn't it how it went the OTHER first time too? *goes watch the scene* OH well *writes even more angsty stuffs*"

XD

I know the writers will come up with something awesome for them in the end, but I do admit that I would die to see a scene like that. I just see them in my head and heeeee so intense, I love them ♥

[miss_bushido]

:3 LOVED IT. "Marionette" broke my heart, and I hope it doesn't take the deaths of Walternate and AltLivia {a long time down the road} for them to finally get together and stay together like they should.

[elialys]

Thank you!! :D

Ultimately, I hope neither Walternate or Altlivia will die (especially Altlivia, because I actually quite love her when she's not, you know, all over Peter). But my muse told me to kill her off in this, who am I to disobey? ^^

[monkeyprincess7]

You know what I'm loving about you fics? the way you portray the characters, bringing them to life on the computer monitor and showing us just how amazing we already know they are.

I knew after "Marionette" that there would be angst, but this is lovely and different and so sweet and tender, while still having the hurt and pain we know both Olivia and Peter are feeling. I can only hope that this happens soon in the show; I have a feeling more of their verse will die before the war is over :/

Awesome <3

[elialys]

Thank you SO VERY MUCH.

I'm so glad my writing make them feel 'real'. I know they do feel real to me when I'm writing them, so it's a pleasure to know it comes out like this too ^^

THANK YOU!!