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Olivia/Peter fanfic (post-Finale): In Reverse (XIX)

Sep 11, 2011 08:14

A/N: This is part XIX...all kind of bittersweet.

Previous parts: I. // II. // III. // IV. // V. // VI. // VII. // VIII. // IX. // X. // XI. // XII. // XIII. // XIV. // XV. // XVI. // XVII. // XVIII.

( Instinctively, he buries himself a little more against Olivia, his body fitting hers perfectly, nose nuzzling her neck, and just then, the baby provides him with a very welcomed distraction as he feels her move somewhere deep beneath his hand. As always, she erases the pain of the past for a while, to engulf him in the wonders of what is to come. )

fringe, in reverse, fanfic, olivia/peter

Comments 2

Awwwwwww tvnut014 September 11 2011, 22:24:21 UTC

I really liked how you tied the picture frames to their pasts. And even though we had seen most of these things happen in the show, you were able to present them in a different way! That's talent right there! :) Seriously though. I know that I'm reaching the end here and that is the biggest tragedy of all. (Well the stillbirth is still pretty horrible... wow this review has just gone down hill hasn't it?)

Re: Awwwwwww elialys September 18 2011, 16:45:56 UTC

Thank you so much! Even though this is much lighter than the previous part, it was actually not fun to write at all knowing what happened to them shortly after. But I wanted them to have a simple yet meaningful discussion, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!