Olivia/Peter fanfic: Meet me in Montauk

[elialys]

Disclaimer: I do not own anything at all, just my vivid imagination.

Spoilers: Up to 3x22 'The Day We Died'.

Rating: T, for some mild sexual situation of course :p

Summary: Four times Olivia forgot Peter in the morning, and the one time she didn't.

A/N: Sooo this is me being super original and writing my own 'Olivia still kinda remembers Peter' fic (

Comments

[namarie24]

This is very, very good! You manage to take the "Olivia remembers Peter" story and make it your own, and it's beautifully in character as well.

[elialys]

Thank you so much, for reading and commenting :) I wanted to try something a little different, I'm glad it worked!

[stripes13]

Beautifully done.

I am so freaking desperate for some new episodes.

[elialys]

Thank you!!

Less than two weeks to go now, we can do this! XD

[sugangel7]

Really love what you did with the water, the drowning, dreams, and the tank. That image of Peter pulling her out of the tank that first time is just so iconic and you flesh that concept out, of him being the ROCK for her amidst a stormy sea, so beautifully.

I love so many parts of this fic like this: No one had ever displayed that sort of quiet emotion for her before.

Just those feelings of emotional intensity that hit her with every look, touch, and fleeting memory. How all of it crashed down at once but it was the in-between moments that really struck her.

I love how you echoed the "Don't apologize - you saved my life" scene from S3. How she confronted him about the choice he'd made that had taken him away from her.

This is just beautiful and totally original and unique, as always. <3

[elialys]

Thank you so much for such a nice comment :')

I don't think I could ever get tired of writing some kind of parallels with things from the show in my stories, and I'm just happy you enjoy those little moments!

[book232]

I already read this on tumblr, and I really, really love this. As always! I'm a big fan of your writing. :)

♥

[elialys]

Thank you so much! :') I'm so glad you've enjoyed this story, I had a lot of fun writing it XD

[melissa_pbfan]

This was superb. ♥

[elialys]

Thank you so much, dear!! ♥