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Olivia/Peter fanfic (post-Finale): In Reverse (parts IV to VI)

May 27, 2011 00:19

A/N: I'm posting part IV, V and VI :)

Previous parts: I. // II. // III.

( He feels like they are living at the edge of a dark abyss, one of those twirling vortexes swallowing everything around them, and the only reason why he hasn't been sucked in yet is because whenever he feels like he's tripping, all he has to do is hold out his hand and he knows she will grab it )

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melissa_pbfan May 29 2011, 13:08:20 UTC

What a joy to see 3 new parts posted after a reaaaally long week spent at an exhibition (for my job... it was pretty sucky).

According to my plan, there are 15 more parts to go!

UM YES PLZ. *faints*

elialys June 13 2011, 15:19:38 UTC

Thank you so very much, for still reading and enjoying! (and commenting XD) I just posted 4 new parts LOL

melissa_pbfan June 14 2011, 17:10:36 UTC

Wee!

*runs off to read*

sugangel7 June 3 2011, 05:22:15 UTC

Really loved this part:

He feels like they are living at the edge of a dark abyss, one of those twirling vortexes swallowing everything around them, and the only reason why he hasn't been sucked in yet is because whenever he feels like he's tripping, all he has to do is hold out his hand and he knows she will grab it.I have a feeling I know what the letter is about. And I really love how you give us these two moments of both of them grieving individually over their own personal burdens and guilt and how both of them know how to be there for one another...how to let the other person grieve and how for each of them a steady, solid presence does more than false worlds or hopes...how silence works best usually for them. How they both know they can't make the other feel better, but the most important thing is just to be there to listen and to hold and support ( ... )

elialys June 13 2011, 15:44:04 UTC

"I love them. You capture their dynamic in a manner that is just right...not too sappy just them."

This me, throwing little hearts at you LOL!! You just make me too happy XD

I'm quite intensely in love with those two, and writing this story is just making it worse. I'm such a sucker for angst, I just love making characters I love suffer, but then I love having some sweetness here and there as well, so I'm having a lot of fun with this fic. BECAUSE THEY ARE SO ADORABLE BEING MARRIED AND ALMOST PERFECT AND FLAWED.

Thank you so much again!!