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Fic: Learning to be Brave

Apr 20, 2008 13:46

Title: Learning to be Brave
Author: Broedy
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Greater minds than mine own Eli Stone.
Spoilers: Up to and including episode 1.11 (Patience)
Summary: Life is about choices. And second chances.
Note: Eep, first time Eli Stoning for me. But I couldn't let the future vision pass without trying my hand at a little fic.

( He focused on her smile, grateful she was there... realizing that she almost hadn't been because, unlike the slogan that surrounded him now, he had been anything but brave. )

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Comments 6

danamulder April 20 2008, 04:43:43 UTC

This is so great! I like how you kind of tie it all together, how maybe they'll face a separation, but ultimately they're meant to be together. I really enjoyed this. :)

broedym April 20 2008, 04:56:35 UTC

Thank you! My wish for the show is many more seasons, so I'm quite prepared for a period of separation if it means we get the future Eli saw in his vision. :-)

Great Fic mismatchrepair April 20 2008, 06:34:54 UTC

Thank you so much. That was so lovely! Great writing. I could totally see it happening that way :)

Please, please let Eli Stone be renewed.

Re: Great Fic broedym April 20 2008, 06:58:21 UTC

Amen to a renewal... and thank you. ;-)

nobleplatypus April 20 2008, 08:01:22 UTC

Eeeee, this is so cute! Well, not 'cute,' exactly, but still eeeeee! ;) I love hugs. Hugs are underappreciated and underused. Forget other displays of affection and GIVE ME MORE HUGS, television!

Also, I can't stop giggling over the term "Eli Stoning." This probably means I should go to bed.

broedym April 20 2008, 08:28:05 UTC

Hee hee, I couldn't resist! ;-)

And ITA about the hugs... especially these two. I can tell they're huggers.

Thanks for the feedback.