You did a really good job writing them in character, to the point that Suigetsu literally wants to kill her at first. If anything ever happened between these two, I imagine it would be like this. Great job!
(Also, you should post this at suigetsuxkarin - not enough people posting at that comm.)
Mmmm, I really enjoyed this! I requested the body enhancement one :) And you definitely delivered, I really liked it and I am becoming a bigger fan of this pairing every day - you are definitely bringing me over to the dark side with this story!
Very hot work. Thanks again for answering my request! You should write these two more!
Thank you! I'm especially pleased to know the requester enjoyed this fic. :D It was fun to write so yeah, thanks for the prompt and the positive review.
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Very hot work. Thanks again for answering my request! You should write these two more!
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