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Awkward 1/1

Mar 11, 2011 11:37

Awkward
NC17
KyuMin
summary: Sungmin and Kyuhyun's first time together.
warning: awkward!sex
beta: mertlekang

a/n: I was so tempted while writing this to change Kyuhyun to Zhou Mi :@ -bricked-

( “That hurts,” Sungmin murmurs and Kyuhyun lets out a loud groan of distress. )

#kyumin, !fanfiction, !oneshot, %smut, @superjunior, *nc-17

Comments 18

mertlekang March 11 2011, 16:57:45 UTC

I've already read this three times
but you're still
the smut queen
/cries

teukiesu March 11 2011, 16:59:29 UTC

3 times
/cries

I'm really tempted to write HanChul
I've watched this Lady GengHee vid like 90 times
it's insane

mertlekang March 11 2011, 17:01:25 UTC

write hanchul ;a;
i command you ahhgh

that girl with the Lady GengHee jacket made me cry :I
happy tears

teukiesu March 11 2011, 17:02:12 UTC

dfdsafas i can't write without plot

i loved geng's reaction ;A;
there's hope :'DDD

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princess_jaded March 11 2011, 18:31:11 UTC

Lol, I read this before - I have it saved in my mems somewhere but I still loved it!

teukiesu March 11 2011, 18:39:29 UTC

I'm honoured you even saved any of my fics in your mem! /bows

It was pretty crappy before - I was going through my old comm and (it sucked) plus, I randomly switched from past to present tense or something. And there were a looot of typos. So yeah, revised it, my friend beta'd it and re-posted. x)

mypinksuperman March 11 2011, 22:07:27 UTC

it's my nth time reading this. LOL
seems likes painful.. :( poor Ming bb.
well, they'll get better in time. MORE PRACTICE KyuMin~!!! keke

teukiesu March 11 2011, 22:22:06 UTC

NINTH?! wow, I'm honoured!
it probably is :(