FIC: No Loose Ends. LoM, Red Cortina.

Dec 05, 2009 23:41

Title: No Loose Ends

Summary: Before Gene, Chris and Ray leave for London, there's some unfinished business…

Author: Me - Elf.

Characters: Ray, Gene.

Word Count: 2100

Rating: Red Cortina

Notes: Wonderfully beta'd by gritsinmisery.

No Loose Ends )

writing, fanfic, lom

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fern_tree December 6 2009, 21:08:48 UTC
WOW, is pretty much all I can say to that! It was fantastic! *cannot form any more coherent thoughts* <3

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elfbert December 6 2009, 21:47:13 UTC
Thank you! (Hope you get your power of thought back before you need it next!)

Thanks for taking the time to comment, too :)

xx

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templeremus December 7 2009, 16:35:55 UTC
Dark, disturbing but terifyingly believable. You conveyed a real sense of what loss can do to a person. Great stuff.

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elfbert December 7 2009, 20:53:45 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad it was dark and disturbing! I think I write too much luvvy wuvvy stuff, and wanted to get back to a darker side.

Cheers for taking the time to comment!

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saintvic December 8 2009, 15:22:39 UTC
As others have said this is very dark and very powerful because of it. It paints a real picture of the man, the way he thinks, and will act. Thank you I thought this was really good.

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elfbert December 8 2009, 20:40:24 UTC
I'm really glad it worked :) Thank you for taking the time to comment. I do enjoy writing dark things, but I'm never sure they will be appreciated!

xx

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