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FIC: No Loose Ends. LoM, Red Cortina.
Dec 05, 2009 23:41
Title: No Loose Ends
Summary: Before Gene, Chris and Ray leave for London, there's some unfinished business…
Author: Me - Elf.
Characters: Ray, Gene.
Word Count: 2100
Rating: Red Cortina
Notes: Wonderfully beta'd by gritsinmisery.
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fern_tree
December 6 2009, 21:08:48 UTC
WOW, is pretty much all I can say to that! It was fantastic! *cannot form any more coherent thoughts* <3
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elfbert
December 6 2009, 21:47:13 UTC
Thank you! (Hope you get your power of thought back before you need it next!)
Thanks for taking the time to comment, too :)
xx
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templeremus
December 7 2009, 16:35:55 UTC
Dark, disturbing but terifyingly believable. You conveyed a real sense of what loss can do to a person. Great stuff.
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elfbert
December 7 2009, 20:53:45 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad it was dark and disturbing! I think I write too much luvvy wuvvy stuff, and wanted to get back to a darker side.
Cheers for taking the time to comment!
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saintvic
December 8 2009, 15:22:39 UTC
As others have said this is very dark and very powerful because of it. It paints a real picture of the man, the way he thinks, and will act. Thank you I thought this was really good.
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elfbert
December 8 2009, 20:40:24 UTC
I'm really glad it worked :) Thank you for taking the time to comment. I do enjoy writing dark things, but I'm never sure they will be appreciated!
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Thanks for taking the time to comment, too :)
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