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(FIC; These Things I'll Never Say)

Nov 11, 2011 14:05

Title: These Things I'll Never Say
Author: themuslimbarbie
Team: Team Amy.
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Prompt: "There is a part of me that will always be in love with you."
Summary: Five times Amy thinks of the Doctor when she probably shouldn't.

( These Things I'll Never Say )

Comments 5

janeausten4ever November 12 2011, 00:24:14 UTC

I really, really liked that. So many new ideas and thoughts to turn around in my head. I liked this one: "She's good at that, after all, ignoring things....Rory eventually comes along and joins them, and she tells herself that those things no longer exist....But sometimes, sometimes she can’t help it. She can’t ignore it and it drives at her until she goes mad. So one day, when Rory’s fast asleep in their bed, she grabs a scrap of paper and writes out exactly what she wants to tell him. And then she stuffs it in her coat pocket and never lets it see the light of day again. Because she will never ever admit it, even if it’s the truest thing she’s ever meant ( ... )

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janeausten4ever November 13 2011, 04:59:13 UTC

Well, if that was what you were going for you definitely hit it right on! I'd be interested to hear the other half of this or anything else, really, that was floating around in your head, if you ever do get the time.

agirlnamedtruth November 12 2011, 00:44:12 UTC

That was brilliant, well done!

a_phoenixdragon November 12 2011, 02:35:41 UTC

Fantastically beautiful, lovie...just...WOW. Utter truth in every line.

Thank you for posting this...I needed this - and I didn't even know until I read it!

*HUGS*

paynesgrey November 29 2011, 03:04:01 UTC

Whoa, this was brilliant. Absolutely perfect. You write Amy so well, even better than the actual writers treat her. Fantastic work!