FIC: Quarrel, 3/3, PG

[elementalv]

Title: Quarrel, 3/3
Rating: PG
Summary: Jim's gut roils again, and more than anything, he wishes he'd gotten to the Tums before Vega got to him.
Notes: Previous installments can be found here. Also, this isn't finished yet.
Disclaimer: Zuiker and company own the rights to CSI and its characters. I own an iBook that could reasonably be described

Comments

[elementalv]

[grins]

[fuzzyboo03]

Oooh, more Brillow! I just realized, one of the things I really enjoy about this is Jim's voice - you've really pegged it.

[elementalv]

I like Jim. In fact, I think I like Jim better than I like Gil. Jim's the kind of guy who doesn't keep you guessing (unless you're a suspect).

[fuzzyboo03]

Oh yes. I like his manner. He doesn't jerk you around.

[elementalv]

He's very forthright. [wails] I want Jim to be my boyfriend!!!

[lprdgrrl]

Just yesterday I was wondering when part 3 was coming and lo and behold, here it is. Yay.

Once again, I love this story. And I'm so very glad it's not over yet.

[elementalv]

I'm glad you're enjoying it, because no, it isn't over yet. One of these days, they'll settle down. I'm sure of it.

[candymike]

I'm with Jim on the Tums. Ugh. But they do what they're supposed to.

Also? Also, this isn't finished yet. *snickers*

Knew *that* was gonna happen...

(if you smack me, please aim for the back of my head...lumps on the side make my glasses sit funny...)

[elementalv]

I'm squishing your head. Squish! Squish!

[houses7177]

Awww, I really do love the way you write Brillows.

[elementalv]

I think these two are the closest I'll ever come to having an OTP. I can't write either of them with anyone else, despite my efforts.

[houses7177]

And they just *work* together they way you write them. Like they couldn't be any other way. It's lovely to read.

[elementalv]

The way I write them gives me hope that I have a clue about how relationships work, despite the fact that my last serious relationship was 17 years ago.

Yeesh, what a depressing thought.