Comments | electrictoad: 空火空 (Air, Fire, Air)

sanjihan in electrictoad

空火空 (Air, Fire, Air)

Jul 01, 2010 01:07

Title: 空火空 (Air, Fire, Air ( Read more... )

c: yamapi, p: massu/yamapi, c: tegoshi, r: pg, #one-shot, au: elementals 'verse, c: massu

Comments 12

lemonadetea July 1 2010, 08:05:21 UTC

This is nice. :) I like this verse. And Massu POV is always nice to see.

Tegoshi ran a finger softly over a cheekbone and whispered, “Are we all like this? He’s so pretty.”
Ngl, I loved that line. Harmlessly conceited Tegoshi ftw :D

sanjihan July 1 2010, 20:04:56 UTC

Thank you. It was sad but... inevitable. And I like writing from Massu POV. :D

XD XD I loved that line too. Cracked up over it so many time. Tegoshi, I love you. XD

zheinpathos July 1 2010, 11:26:54 UTC

Aw, Massu ;A; Aw, Yamapi ;A;

Tegoshi's assertiveness is good for these two, methinks 8D
Nicely done!

<3

sanjihan July 1 2010, 20:05:21 UTC

:) Thank you!!

fancyann1974 July 2 2010, 02:59:19 UTC

very nice
thank you for sharing

sanjihan July 2 2010, 04:50:54 UTC

Thank you!

digitalized_ July 4 2010, 09:09:22 UTC

I love this. And it doesn't hurt that I ADORE Massu/Pi, and your Massu/Pi here feels natural ♥ I like how it's Tegoshi who notices Yamapi, but it's Masuda who gets close. Or maybe I just like your Tegoshi xD

sanjihan July 4 2010, 17:14:54 UTC

Thank you! I also love MassuPi if they're a bit difficult to write. XD And lol at liking my Tegoshi. Me too. ;) Thanks for the nice comment!

dw9lives July 16 2010, 00:45:25 UTC

absolutely LOVED it! so many emotions, you write them so well.

sanjihan July 21 2010, 01:03:42 UTC

Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it.