sink or swim (Sam/Dean, PG-13)

Feb 25, 2011 22:10

It's apreludetoanend's birthday. I miss her. ♥

Over a year ago, I wrote her in their element, a short fic about Sam & Dean 'as undercover doctors who have to make out in their scrubs so people don't find out they're not real doctors.' I needed some loose semblance of plot structure, and ended up with an air elemental. I then decided to continue into a series, ( Read more... )

dean, sam, sam/dean, fic, spn, erin is a goddess

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essene February 26 2011, 03:16:16 UTC
I did go back and read the other one as well. Got a bit of an elemental thing going on here, doncha? I LIKE.

I also like how frazzled Dean is about the whole thing.

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electricalgwen February 28 2011, 00:39:00 UTC
Thanks! The idea was to focus on the elements, although not necessarily elementals...but it seemed to work. :)

Dean is dealing with rather a lot at the moment anyway...this seemed likely to fry his brain somewhat. *g*

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tabaqui February 26 2011, 07:09:42 UTC
Oh, Sammy. And the moonlight, the lake, the cold water, the blood....
*shivers*

And the memory of the kiss, and oh, Dean.
*hugs them both*

Good stuff.

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electricalgwen February 28 2011, 00:40:37 UTC
:D. Very glad you like! I loved the image of the moonlight, blood and water...glad it worked for you.

Omg your ICON!!

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tabaqui February 28 2011, 01:08:07 UTC
Isn't it lovely? It's by seymourspn - they do wonderful art and icons.

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brutti_ma_buoni February 26 2011, 16:54:39 UTC
Mmm, I like this very much. I also went to read the air one, which is fun, but I like how this is so much more tense and Dean at least is building on the first kiss and getting increasingly tense.

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electricalgwen March 1 2011, 15:16:03 UTC
Thank you so much! I can't see how things could get any more involved *without* getting a lot more tense, so I'm glad that came across. :)

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laisserais February 27 2011, 15:45:06 UTC
yay, you posted! i still love this.

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electricalgwen March 1 2011, 15:16:57 UTC
:D

I decided maybe I had the order wrong after all. I've more or less thrown out the original 'fire' draft and I'll see where it goes from here...

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mlebayre March 1 2011, 01:38:55 UTC
Liked a lot!

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electricalgwen March 1 2011, 15:17:15 UTC
Thank you! :)

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