SPN J2 AU fic: Green Means Go (2/4)

[electricalgwen]

Comments

[laisserais]

i'm totally going to be one of those people who leave you comments on every chapter. :P

oh man, i love puzzling over who works with/for whom. so good! and i'm enjoying the banter between them; the dialogue's really spot on. also digging jensen's belief in jared's revelations, while still not really feeling them. yay!

[electricalgwen]

And I totally love you for it. :D

Yay, glad it continues to intrigue! And thanks, I'm happy to hear the banter worked for you.

[keerawa]

Jensen's on-going irritation with his subconcious amuses me.

Jared stirs behind him, and says, “Jensen,” voice full of sleep and gravel.
Jensen’s whole body flushes hot, he can barely breathe, and oh yeah. That’s how his name ought to sound.
Mmmmm, better believe it. I like the way that Jensen, even with no memory of Jared, still trusts him.

[electricalgwen]

Jensen's conversation with his subconscious crept into the story fairly late but it amused me. *g*

Thanks so much for letting me know what worked for you in each part. I liked that moment; it's nice to know someone else did too.

[truelyesoteric]

I rarely comment halfway through, but this, this is so so good. Like I'm jealous good. Must go read rest.

[electricalgwen]

Wow, thanks! This makes me very happy. :D