Fic: One Last Hurrah (Faith/Anya; R-rating)

Feb 23, 2010 17:51

Title: One Last Hurrah
Rating: soft R
Pairing: Faith/Anya
Summary: It's the night before the big battle at the hellmouth and Monopoly isn't the only game Faith is interested in playing.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, nor do I make money from writing about them.

Note: Written for fluffybkitty for the Faith round of the femslash_minis ficathon. She requested ( Read more... )

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fluffybkitty February 24 2010, 00:28:38 UTC
Oh, this was even better than I could have imagined and really funny. You did well to get all three prompts in so naturally and I especially like the image of Anya standing on her chair because of her monopoly piece lol. Your Kennedy is mean! But she took her bra off so I'll forgive her ;)

Incidentally, Strip Monopoly - inspired. I originally put strip poker as the prompt, but then I remembered Anya couldn't play poker but loved Monopoly so I switched, and it makes it now like I got an extra prompt for free :D Plus, of course Faith is going to change the rules to spice things up.

And kudos for managing to fit in the impression of Buffy perving on Faith in her bra ^^ That made me laugh out loud. I love how you manage to get a splash of Fuffy into everything.

I'll read this again tomorrow and probably think of a dozen other wicked points I want to mention but til then, thanks for writing this, you did a great job with it :)

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electra126 March 5 2010, 15:44:08 UTC
Aww, yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I couldn't find a sexy way to get them together without relying on a few cliches, but they were totally fun to write together :)

And you know I can't get too far from the Fuffy. lol ♥

Thanks for letting me know you liked it :)

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lavastar February 24 2010, 01:20:41 UTC
Very, very cute - I love the interaction between the two of them, and all of them getting drunk and playing strip Monopoly seems like the perfect possibly-last-night-alive activity to me. :D

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electra126 March 5 2010, 15:45:58 UTC
Thanks! :) I wrote a Faith series last year and had lots of fun with Anya/Faith banter. Trying to add sexiness was a challenge, but fun nonetheless. Thanks for your feedback! :)

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donthaveaprob February 24 2010, 13:08:49 UTC
I loved it, E, you write a great Anya. "I don't like the money, but it likes me" Righhhht... And of course we all know you can write a very convincing Faith. The story had a nice flow to it, and you got all of the Scoobies in it. You made me laugh when Faith kept landing in jail and we found out why. Nicely done!

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electra126 March 5 2010, 15:54:39 UTC
Thanks Dee :) It's a hoot and a half to try to get into Anya's brain. It was difficult to bring the sexy but the funny was, well...fun. :p And Faith in jail just seemed right. lol Thanks for your feedback :)

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snogged February 25 2010, 04:15:04 UTC
This was adorable and naughty :)
What an excellent combination.

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electra126 March 5 2010, 15:58:26 UTC
Thanks so much :) Glad ya liked it!

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dylanxtra_x February 26 2010, 00:58:45 UTC
I heart our Anya. You should do her more, preferably with Faith in the mix like this :p

Very cute story, and the characterizations were spot on.

Also, it made me want to play monopoly ^^

Great work as always, boo :)

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dylanxtra_x February 26 2010, 00:58:57 UTC
*your

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electra126 March 5 2010, 16:02:06 UTC
If I can think of a plot to get them together believably and sexily, I will certainly try that. =P

You. Me. Later. MONOPOLY. :D

Thanks for your feedback :)

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