The Cowardly Sex God

[eleanor_ariail]

I've started to write a whiny post about four times today, but I just can't let myself do that. So instead, have some spur of the moment (written at work) porn! Out of character? Maybe. Poorly written? Probably. But porn nonetheless.

Pairing: DG/ ...Raw! Plus talk of others. Oh yes.

Comments

[naturalbluicons]

I really liked this. It's the first Raw fic I've read. Beautiful imagery, and very tasteful. =) I loved the image of Raw trying to dress up a bit for DG.

Raw felt her open beneath him, and he let himself fall into the chasm.
This sentence is gorgeous on all levels.

[eleanor_ariail]

Thank you so much! It's the first Raw fic I've really written, so I was very nervous about it. I'm so glad you liked it! (And this is totally the reason I needed a pretty Raw icon, so thank you for that too!)

[angel_belle]

oh please tell me there is a sequel...please.

[eleanor_ariail]

There are kind of... parts of a sequel written. Nothing cohesive or near completion at the moment. I'd like to finish it at some point, though.

[penny_hill]

Just a quick note to let you know that I just rec'ed this story on The GrayGale. I enjoyed the imagery and found it tastefully done. Thanks for letting it loose on tinman_fic!

[eleanor_ariail]

Thank you! What a lovely rec!

[amedia]

His mouth followed his hand as it moved over her body, always the exact pressure, the exact friction, always exactly what she needed.

This is wonderfully erotic AND in-character!

And this part: "DG didn't. Raw thought of them,
knocked me out - they had a real meeting of the minds, didn't they?

Thank you for writing, and for sharing!

[eleanor_ariail]

Thank you! I don't do very much in the way of adult fic, or Raw, so I'm glad it came across well!