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Love Like Ghosts 11/13

Jul 15, 2010 09:06

Title: Love Like Ghosts 11/13
Author: eldritchhorrors
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, Kirk/Pike , and Kirk/Pike/McCoy, but overall, it is really Kirk/McCoy.
Rating: NC-17 overall, R this chapter
Warnings: Language
Notes: Sorry about the wait. I've been having some issues with school, and problems with depression, so this chapter took forever. The next one will be up much ( Read more... )

pike/ jim kirk, rating: nc-17, stxi, i want to molest leonard mccoy, mccoy/kirk, love like ghosts, slash, pairing: kirk/mccoy, fic, llg, pike/ mccoy, kirk/mccoy, kirk/pike, pike/kirk

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eldritchhorrors July 15 2010, 16:18:50 UTC

Thank You. I'm glad you liked it. Sorry it took so long to get out.

zauzat July 15 2010, 19:59:53 UTC

Bravo! *standing ovation* It was always a great chapter and the reworks and additions have really made it stand out.

Somehow, somewhere, he’d lost his way. He’d confused the role of protector with ownership, which was as dehumanizing as anything he’d known. This is inspired!

eldritchhorrors July 16 2010, 00:17:15 UTC

You were a terrific beta, especially since what I gave you was such a mish-mash. I really love how much you took my style into account, and how you didn't pull any punches. I appreciate the truth.

And this chapter would have fallen flat without your input I knew what I needed to say, I just couldn't organize it.

Thank You!

zauzat July 16 2010, 06:59:02 UTC

I really enjoyed working on it. If you need more anytime, just say.

jedibuttercup July 15 2010, 20:27:43 UTC

Still as amazing as ever. I can't help but write the boys happier myself, but this is such a realistic fractured version of them, and you write them so well. Very glad to see this updated.

Lots of painful truths here, but this one resonated most with me:
> It was isolated events, anomalies instead of a steady chain. Happy was a goddamn phantom, ghosts you couldn't grab without bone-chattering cold to show for the effort.

eldritchhorrors July 16 2010, 00:21:19 UTC

Thanks! I've written some comedy with the K/M pairing, but the gritty realism and angst just seems to flow more naturally for me.

twisting_vine_x July 15 2010, 22:22:31 UTC

It was isolated events, anomalies instead of a steady chain. Happy was a goddamn phantom, ghosts you couldn't grab without bone-chattering cold to show for the effort.

♥ ♥ ♥

eldritchhorrors July 16 2010, 00:21:58 UTC

Hee!

claudia_nic July 15 2010, 23:44:12 UTC

I'm so glad you are continuing this! And yet another fantastic chapter. Bones is just so full of anger and confused, but I'm hoping that once he gets his head around all of it, he'll be making the right decisions again.

eldritchhorrors July 16 2010, 00:31:00 UTC

I've been working on this one for months. I wrote, rewrote, trashed, wrote, edited, deleted, wrote, moved everything around, tried different perspectives, purged, cried, rewrote and finally said fuck it before I put together the best scenes with what I wanted to say and sent them to a long suffering beta.

Zauzat is made of GOLD.

I'm glad you liked it, and I don't think that you will be disappointed with the next chapter. Things are finally coming to a close.

claudia_nic July 16 2010, 00:38:15 UTC

I know the feeling. I have the next chapter of my fic sitting on my desktop, beta-ed and ready to go, but I reread it and I don't like a single word of it. Not one...even though at some point I must have, because I wrote them down. Argghh!