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Together, They Fought (A Five Times Fic)

Jan 03, 2015 00:55

Title: Together, They Fought (A Five Times Fic)
Author: eldorah
Word Count: 4,395
Rating: PG
Characters: Mozzie, Peter, Neal
Spoilers: 6.06 - Au Revoir
Warnings: None
Beta Credit: Many thanks to the lovely rose_of_sharon1, who diligently read more revisions of this than I can count. Thank you, my friend. Any remaining mistakes are mine.
Summary: Set during ( Read more... )

eldorah, white collar, mozzie, peter burke, neal caffrey

Comments 30

caseyf123 January 3 2015, 06:22:11 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful!!!!!!!!! So touching and tender. The ending was perfection. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story. You made my eventing.

eldorah January 3 2015, 06:30:30 UTC

Aww, thank you so much!!! I am so very glad you enjoyed this piece! :D

pipilj January 3 2015, 10:30:26 UTC

Lovely collection of snipets. Love the way Peter looks out for Mozzie without being overbearing. I always like it Mozzie calls him by his name instead of "suit". Mozzie leaving Peter clues to Neal being alive , loved the term "Micro-Suit Neal." that so Mozzie

eldorah January 3 2015, 14:58:35 UTC

Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed this!! Yes, I also love when Mozzie calls Peter by his real name instead of Suit.. Suit is funny, and very, very Mozzie, but to me when he uses his real name, Mozzie realizes Peter is also a friend. Thank you again!

anonymous January 3 2015, 13:20:23 UTC

I loved this--it fixes every hole that the finale left, and was so perfectly in character and sweet. Like Mozzie, I can't help but feel that Neal deserves a punch in the nose, but I can also understand his overwhelming joy. I would love a sequel where Peter arrives in Paris, but this is perfect just as it is, too.

eldorah January 3 2015, 15:01:54 UTC

Thank you so much! :D I am sure a long conversation (and plenty of wine) is soon to follow between Mozzie and Neal... I imagine Mozzie is not very happy to be have been conned like that on multiple levels. I will think about a sequel.. I do have ideas about Peter's arrival in Paris, as well! Thank you again!

dennih23 January 3 2015, 14:37:05 UTC

Love Peter and Moz watching out for each other, Moz has definitely become part of the Peter's world (and Diana's because of Theo). And now Peter, Neal and Moz will all be together again.

Thanks for sharing.

eldorah January 3 2015, 15:03:07 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Yes, Moz, whether he likes it or not, is slowly weaving his way into the Suit's world... :)

Thank you again!

kanarek13 January 3 2015, 14:50:27 UTC

Oh, so, soooooo wonderful \o/ And all Peter and Moz, they are really our beloved odd couple on the show, and getting to read about their very unusual friendship is such a treat :D Awwww. It is so great that during that year Mozzie was not alone, he still had his friends, family really :D

Wonderful all around \o/

eldorah January 3 2015, 15:04:52 UTC

::hugs:: Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed this! I can't imagine Peter leaving Mozzie alone during that year... it's in his nature to need to protect something... even if it is his Mozzie. :)