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Mar 07, 2005 22:20

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carve_your_name March 8 2005, 14:04:28 UTC
awesome awesome poems, well written
(i like the first one best)
and
i wish i could say something,
but i'm not quite sure what to say
so i'll leave it at that.

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thanks elderchilddayen March 8 2005, 17:23:16 UTC
thanks.

I've had a couple people ask me if I'm going to publish all of these someday.

I had better intentions for the beginning of that poem though, but alas, sometimes my muse works in a different manner than I expected. It has a good beat and meter though, and for that the entire process of writing it was worth it.

I was hoping someone would like my fun with alliteration or the second one the best. Any which way it really was just a combination of being really bored in my math class, with a delay due to the teacher's absence. It also didn't help my attention when he posed the class a question I figured the answer to based on all the FMA I've seen. Gotta love equivilent exchange.

-David-

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peachy_keenpixy April 15 2005, 22:36:22 UTC
Your very talented, I wish I could be a poetic as you are.

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thank you elderchilddayen April 15 2005, 22:53:22 UTC
thank you.

since I do not recall you, I must ask the question, do I know you?

-David-

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