awesome awesome poems, well written (i like the first one best) and i wish i could say something, but i'm not quite sure what to say so i'll leave it at that.
I've had a couple people ask me if I'm going to publish all of these someday.
I had better intentions for the beginning of that poem though, but alas, sometimes my muse works in a different manner than I expected. It has a good beat and meter though, and for that the entire process of writing it was worth it.
I was hoping someone would like my fun with alliteration or the second one the best. Any which way it really was just a combination of being really bored in my math class, with a delay due to the teacher's absence. It also didn't help my attention when he posed the class a question I figured the answer to based on all the FMA I've seen. Gotta love equivilent exchange.
Comments 4
(i like the first one best)
and
i wish i could say something,
but i'm not quite sure what to say
so i'll leave it at that.
Reply
I've had a couple people ask me if I'm going to publish all of these someday.
I had better intentions for the beginning of that poem though, but alas, sometimes my muse works in a different manner than I expected. It has a good beat and meter though, and for that the entire process of writing it was worth it.
I was hoping someone would like my fun with alliteration or the second one the best. Any which way it really was just a combination of being really bored in my math class, with a delay due to the teacher's absence. It also didn't help my attention when he posed the class a question I figured the answer to based on all the FMA I've seen. Gotta love equivilent exchange.
-David-
Reply
Reply
since I do not recall you, I must ask the question, do I know you?
-David-
Reply
Leave a comment