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drawingintheair in elastic_4

A Circumnavigation

May 01, 2011 22:33

a circumnavigation
eunhyuk/donghae
r
5120
With your broken compass and my outdated map, we will reach the end of the world and back

( Hyukjae sighs and stares at the flashing scenery beyond the glass. It’s colder here in spring, trees starting to bloom with lacy flowers and Hyukjae thinks about Cherry Blossoms and how they’ll be fluttering in the wind by the time they go back home. )

pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, author: the super awfadtco, work: fanfiction, fandom: super junior, length: one-shot, rating: r

Comments 53

tees2mai May 2 2011, 02:43:51 UTC

/noms

eunhyuk_jewel May 2 2011, 03:11:02 UTC

Spot.

legohearts May 2 2011, 04:16:08 UTC

awww this is so lovely ♥
it's so sweet to see those two like that on vacation C:
hahaha I can just picture they're failed french and lost directions~
but as long as they're together I'm sure they can find a way to have fun ^^
lmao and of course you have to have french cuisine if you go france~
It’s like going to America and not eating a hotdog. Completely ridiculous.
>>rofl so true. xD
hehe and the whole Lady and the Tram scene sounded very adorable :3
for some reason it also slightly reminded me of artie and brittany from glee O.o;
but lmao @ “And then you’ll lick the marinara sauce off my nose and be so grateful, when we get back to the room you’ll give me a blow job.”
“I’m not licking the marinara sauce off your nose.”
“Is that a yes to the blow job?”puhahahaha those two are just too funny xDD ( ... )

drawingintheair May 6 2011, 01:39:35 UTC

It's funny how easy it is to imagine these two getting lost and completely murdering another language, it's sad. LOL now whenever I think of that scene I will always think of Brittany and Artie. Completely agree about the boys needing more vacation.

Thank you for reading and commenting~

hutatsu May 2 2011, 04:53:14 UTC

this is beautiful.
everything about it, from the ease of their dialogue to the imagery to every little hint and piece of emotion you have sewn in-between. god, just the images/details, the characterization of them is so gorgeous and well written. every section had me sighing in happiness, enjoyment, and despair at that undertone of sadness/acknowledgment of the unsaid within their interactions. i am in awe of what you were able to do, within 5120 words about a trip to paris; everything is simply here because without it the story is not complete. there are too many places that i want to quote but i'll just say instead that i loved your portrayal of donghae, every line of his is just so, so him (at least i think the perceived donghae^^) and breathtaking. i am a vigilant stalker of your lj from now on, thank you so much for sharing this; please continue to post more of your remarkable writing <3

drawingintheair May 6 2011, 02:23:09 UTC

You are seriously too kind :) I'm especially glad you liked Donghae's characterization. He can be both very difficult and very easy to write and it's a major compliment he seemed in character. Thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful comment <3

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drawingintheair May 6 2011, 02:30:03 UTC

Psychic I am not (at least not that I know of)

LOL XDDDDDDDD