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drawingintheair in elastic_4

Mapping Roads

Apr 09, 2011 23:03

mapping roads
eunhyuk/donghae
pg-13
4279
They are caught in a push and pull. Neither knowing who is really doing the pushing or the pulling, only that they both want to fall.

Part of my Closing Distances verse. Takes place after this and this.

( Hyukjae smirks and Donghae half expects him to leave, leave Donghae caught in this game of twist and release they've been playing. )

pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, rating: pg-13, author: the super awfadtco, work: fanfiction, fandom: super junior, length: multishot

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M I N E tees2mai April 10 2011, 03:08:27 UTC

Re: M I N E tees2mai April 10 2011, 03:58:28 UTC

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Re: M I N E xoxo_nat_xx April 10 2011, 04:09:03 UTC

SAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM <3

Anyway I LOVE THE SEXUAL TENSION ALYYYYYYYYYY. HIP FETISH I SEE YOU THERE.

Re: M I N E drawingintheair April 14 2011, 19:46:34 UTC

SAM is <3 I'm glad you see that Nat XD

Idky but for some reason teenage eunhae=sexual tension to me here.

HIP FETISH FOREVER OKAY? It is my #1 Eunhae fetish along with thighs (and arms, and abs, and tongues, and well, you get my point)

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drawingintheair April 14 2011, 20:04:57 UTC

I haven't updated since November so I'm surprised people still remembered it.
And I'm really glad this line stood out to you because while subtly, it has to do with Hyukjae's father.

Thanks for reading and commenting~

the_night_thief April 10 2011, 07:40:47 UTC

So I had to go through and read the whole 'verse because I couldn't remember it. ... I can't even string together a coherent thought now, much less a worthy comment.

That said, I'm going to bed. Because there's no way I'm going to be able to thinnk any more tonight. Way to blow my mind. Again. <3

drawingintheair April 14 2011, 20:06:37 UTC

The fact that I can leave you so incoherent is in itself a huge compliment, so thank you. (Especially reading this whole verse in one go) <3

zaboomafoo76 April 10 2011, 07:42:29 UTC

ohmyword this is amazing!!! :O
the sexual tension is crazy, and i like the storyline a lot too!!! :D

drawingintheair April 14 2011, 20:07:23 UTC

LOL I feel like the story line might get a bit overshadowed a bit, so I'm glad you like it as well XD

fanaeh April 10 2011, 09:49:08 UTC

go hae!!!
hyukkie is such a coward
hihi.can't wait for next(if there is any)
this is beautiful~love your writing

drawingintheair April 14 2011, 20:08:02 UTC

Thank you so much :) And yes there will be more hopefully