Illegal Palpitations (Chapter 5)

[curionenene]

Title: Illegal Palpitations
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Humor, Drama
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Warning: Hints of smut
Summary: It sucks when you’re boyfriend is on the other side of the law, but the rewards for hanging on and believing in that love are much more than Donghae and Hyukjae can ever imagine.

Role-play with tees2mai: She plays Hyukjae and I play

Comments

[yuue04]

*BOUNCING AROUND*

MINE!!!

[yuue04]

I HAVE ALWAYS THINK THAT POLICE ALL OVER THE WORLD ARE FOOLS!!!
I MEAN EVEN IN DETECTIVE CONAN *I HOPE YOU KNOW HIM* THE POLICE ARE DEPENDING ON SHINICHI TO SOLVE THE CASE *FACE PALM*
SO YOU IDIOTS, STOP BEING SUCH AN IDIOT AND DO YOUR JOBS CORRECTLY OR I'LL STOMP YOU GUYS
*CUDDLES HAE* I UNDERSTAND WHAT HE'S FEELING BUT I HOPE HE WOULD STOP THINKING NEGATIVELY
HE ISN'T THE ONLY ONE WHO NEEDS HYUK, HYUK NEEDS HIM TOO
AND HYUK IS TRYING HIS BEST TO GIVE THE BEST FOR HIM, SO I HOPE HE WOULD STOP WEEPING BECAUSE THAT WILL KILL HYUK

THIS STORY MAKES ME MORE AND MORE ANXIOUS EACH TIME YOU UPDATED!!!
THANKS FOR WRITING HOPE TO SEE UPDATE SOON

[moonstalkspark]

//crying

I hope everything will get better after this. Plus, I hope donghae won't forget little hyukkie. Gosh, this is too saddening that I really wanna cry in real life.

Nice Story.. I really love it.. You are a genius!

[qilaelf]

NO! You wouldn't do this! Why? Why why why? Oh Donghae!! Keep holding on! You'll get better someday (right?? )
And Hyuk!!*patting his shoulders* I know how u feel..please, a little bit more..

Please..take that pain away!! Make them together happily!! I'm..sadd.. Its all your fault!! Update soon!

[wooniste]

Donghae's condition is so heartbreaking T^T *sob*
Can't wait for the next chapter

[farahaehyuk]

oh my god. it's so heartbreaking.
hope everything will be alright :(