Tracks That Lead Us {Part Two}

[drawingintheair]

Tracks That Lead Us
donghae/eunhyuk
high school au
pg-13
8244 words
These are the paths we follow, these are the paths we create. Most of us have our fates set from the moment our feet brush the road. Donghae thinks he has to be the first to cross the finishing line; Hyukjae knows he has the race won from the start. It's not about the race at all.

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[poisonpickles]

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This had my heart going... well, asdfhjklfaklweughulahuwea 8(
It's so cute and funny and sweet and beautiful ;___; ♥

[drawingintheair]

IDK how else to reply to this except:

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DANI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thesaddestlove]

Every word, every line is perfect.

You are so amazing.

I really, really want more of my thoughts to flow through my fingers and materialize on the screen but gdi, my mind has been blown away by the sheer beauty of this. I hope you never stop writing EunHae, it's like oxygen to me now. ;A; Please tell me there's still part three because I'm dying to read it. ♥

[thesaddestlove]

An afterthought: I love your Yesung in this. I never really imagined YeHae to be best friends, despite the whole 쪼끄마니 thing, but you made it work. He's an awesome best friend, and this particular line right here: "Well. Do you want to be the guy or the girl in the relationship?” cracked me up so bad. I loved their interactions in the first one too.

AHHHHKYASFHAJKFHAUSHFASASHFJASH. Sincerely hoping for an update soon. I can't wait to see how things develop from here. <33333

[drawingintheair]

Gosh thank you so much. I'm thrilled you are enjoying it and yes there is a part three and then some after that ;)

[thesaddestlove]

/cue fangirl scream

"...and then some after that." My life is made.

Can't wait for the other parts, then. ♥ /happy dance

[tesa11]

I'M LOST...donghae's emotion just...you successly capture it into words...
and Yesung...everytime he appear I always laugh...really...

will waiting for next part~ ^^

[drawingintheair]

Yesung is one of my favorite things about this.

Thanks for reading and commenting~

[rubyls]

dude. dude this is gold. i care not what you thought when you first wrote this, you need to realise this is a diamond and i'm going to punch you if you ever think of not finishing this.

your yesung is fantastic. HAVE I SAID THAT ALREADY? anyway i love him and i love you.

and i've told you this before but i want to say it again: what i like best about this fic is the fire that burns in donghae when he runs/when he is with hyukjae/with yesung/when he does math, even, this fire that just speaks volumes about his youth and passion and i love it. ♥

[drawingintheair]

Dude if I don't finish this you are more than welcome to punch me.

I'd never thought of writing Yesung before because I didn't really ship him with anyone and I can't do suju band fic but I am in love with him and Donghae being bff. They would rule the world and I can't believe no one has ever done it before and I shall fill the world with YeHae bffry fic to make up for it D:

Donghae, especially teenage Donghae, strikes me as the type that when he wants something, he goes all out for it until it's his with this passion and yes, Donghae omgwhydoilovehimsomuch/cries

Anyhow. I'm so glad you like this and I love you for reading this, for liking it, and for being you aka totes awesome :3

[luvey]

i forgot how i found this, i'm thinking it was andi who originally sent me here, or maybe nathy....but either way. i like. i love the way you are writing donghae. there is something special with a quietness in how your eunhyuk is developing. and yesung is just lovely comic relief. i look forward to seeing how this develops.

[drawingintheair]

You know I always think writing Donghae will be complicated because he's my bias but he is just a joy to write. And as an adolescent he breathes so much life into the youthfulness that is being a teenager that I really like exploring. I'm glad you like how Eunhyuk is developing and we can always use a bit of comic relief ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting~