Journal writing class assignment

[elara_bonnie]

1620,

Sylvia, I do remember my promise to write to you, and I am praying to God for your good health. I am sorry my letters have been far in-between, and I confess a terrible event sends me urgently to my desk to write to you.

My fingers are going numb as I write in this bitter season. Even if nature’s blooms try in vain to push themselves out

Comments

[alisa5179]

I've always loved historical fiction. Really nicely written, Bonnie!

[elara_bonnie]

Thanks Alisa

[lookingland]

what a great premise! i like how, juxtaposed, the letter and the encounter with Father create such wonderful tension ~ we know what's going to happen next and we're terrified for poor Becca!

that said, Nat's a jerk for leaving her to it ~ hahahahaha ~

: D

[elara_bonnie]

Aww thanks for reading the whole thing! I appreciate it. Yeah, Nat is really immature and impulsive! Little bugger!