Lay Down the Law

[el_spirito23]

Rating: PG-13
Word-count: 2878
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Summary: The Winchesters are overdue. Ellen is pissed.
Notes: Written for hoodie_time's Writing Between the Lines Challenge, prompt 45 for kalliel
Disclaimer: They're still not mine

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

So I knew this had to end all right and I was still really nervous as I read because you had me right in Ellen's headspace worrying with her!

[kalliel]

OMG! :DDDDDDDDDDDD This is so wonderful; I had no idea anyone had claimed my prompt! And this is awesome; I love the story you crafted around that one sentence.

Thins line was fabulous: “If the next words out of your mouth are not ‘I understand’ or ‘Yes, Ma’am,’ or ‘Gee, you’re right Ellen, I’m sorry we were so irresponsible,’ you’re going to regret it.” Aw, Ellen. <33

And I love the mixture of no-nonsense matter-of-fact medicine and familial concern interlacing each other. Man, I miss the Roadhouse gang so much; but I'm glad that they were there for the Winchesters in this fic. I'm in awe of your ability to balance so many characters all in the same scene, especially when so much is going on, and the stakes are so high for everyone.

Beyond fantastic; thank you so much for writing this!!

[catsintheattic]

That was intense! I was worrying along with Ellen, almost not daring to breathe.

[saberivojo]

I love Mama Bear Ellen...what a great take on her.

[rince1wind]

Great!