The Boy and the Bunny Part 1

Nov 03, 2010 12:41

So this is really AU and something pretty new for me, but this idea took hold and wouldn't let go, so here it is...

Spoilers: None
Characters: Tony DiNozzo, Anthony DiNozzo Sr, Shannon Gibbs, Leroy Gibbs
Rating: PG-13 for implied child abuse
Summary: Shannon Gibbs is a pediatric nurse, and when she's asked to make a house call to a wealthy man's house ( Read more... )

au, little!tony, shannon, gibbs, tony, ncis

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lillian_raven November 3 2010, 19:10:48 UTC
Nice! A really good start! Your Tony and your Shannon are really well written. :)

Personally I don't think that abusers like Daddy!DiNozzo would show so open their behavior, but I'm looking forward to see how you will continue this fic.

Is Kelly already born?

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el_spirito23 November 3 2010, 23:25:49 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I was kind of trying to go for DiNozzo Senior being more concerned about propriety and whatnot and being a little subtle in his abuse- thanks for pointing that out.
And so far, Kelly hasn't born.

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starbuckssue November 3 2010, 22:39:35 UTC
Poor baby, no wonder Shannon is so upset, she has so much compassion and love and she can see that Tony is such an unloved child.

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el_spirito23 November 3 2010, 23:27:02 UTC
Thanks, I was a little bit nervous about trying to portray Shannon since we don't know very much about her, so I tried to make her Gibbs-worthy. Glad you're enjoying.

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kateri_e November 4 2010, 03:18:12 UTC
Really nice start, looking forward to where you will go from here

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el_spirito23 November 4 2010, 19:31:28 UTC
Thanks! I'm looking forward to it too.

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tay_angel November 4 2010, 20:37:18 UTC
Love this AU looking forward to reading more Star

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