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quoththewriter March 30 2011, 22:29:20 UTC
They definitely deserve a raise! :D Hee, I love any and all stories where Danny leaves and Steve trails after him like a worried little puppy. And declarations of love in front of the whole Williams family are a bonus. Loved this!

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el_gilliath March 30 2011, 22:39:26 UTC
Thank you :D

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grimcognito March 30 2011, 22:34:09 UTC
Can you imagine the Williams interrigation that's about to go down?! God help you, Steve. I'm sure his love-struck confession will help him in the long run. :D I love your amused Danny.

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el_gilliath March 30 2011, 22:40:13 UTC
Oh yeah, I can imagine it! Thank you :)

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huntress69 March 30 2011, 22:39:55 UTC
I loved this so very much and I thank you for sharing it. Brightened my day!! And Chin and Kono definitely need a raise LOL.

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el_gilliath March 30 2011, 22:40:51 UTC
Well thank you for reading! And of course they do, a raise is the only way to go :)

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wolwiegirl3 March 30 2011, 23:02:26 UTC
THIS WAS AWESOME :) I really hope for a sequel, because even if it was short, you got their voice and everything perfectly right ^^

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el_gilliath March 30 2011, 23:09:04 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! I might write a sequel sometime when RL calms down, we'll see :)

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ciaimpala March 30 2011, 23:45:41 UTC
I'm the original prompter, and I had a really really awful day, and this just made me smile, which I needed more than I can say.

I love this so much! You wrote it brilliantly, so Steve and Danny, and so perfect. I would love a sequel definitely if you get the chance-I would love to see Steve get interrogated by the Williams clan! And Kono and Chin get their raises for being awesome ;)

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el_gilliath March 31 2011, 00:04:51 UTC
I'm so happy you liked it! It was an absolutely brilliant prompt, I fell inlove with it right away and I just knew I had to write and. And yay for making you smile!

We'll see about a sequel, this RL stuff gotta come first, but I will def think about it :)

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