Comments | el_gilliath: Fic: Dark (Naruto/Sasuke)

el_gilliath

Fic: Dark (Naruto/Sasuke)

Sep 30, 2008 21:33

My first fic in ages. Damn, it feels good!

Title: Dark
Author: el_gilliath
Disclaimer: It ain't mine. Sasuke would stop being so revengeful if they where
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst
Chapter: Drabbleish one shot
Summary: He always comes in the dark

( Dark. He always comes in the dark )

fanfiction: my fic, pairing: sasuke/naruto, anime: naruto

Comments 6

psycho_freak77 September 30 2008, 20:08:01 UTC

awwww...oddly cute (to me, at least) and the angst mixes in perfectly. good job, with the exception of one typo, "He ignores meby day". i'm gonna assume that that was supposed to be "He ignores me by day", right?

el_gilliath September 30 2008, 20:17:53 UTC

Yeah. That's what happens when you type directly into LJ, silly typos. Thanks for spotting!

izzyisozaki September 30 2008, 23:03:02 UTC

FEEL THE DENIAL.
XD
That was cute...they can say what they want...but the facts don't change XD

el_gilliath September 30 2008, 23:10:44 UTC

To quote Pierce Brosnan; My sentiments exactly XD

emo_aires October 1 2008, 18:53:32 UTC

oh my gosh i love this it makes me want to cry it blends so perfectly and i love the way you keep them in character. this is trully a work of art...if you have any more left in you share it with the world...we really would and do appericate it.

el_gilliath October 1 2008, 18:57:21 UTC

Thank you so much:) I'm glad you like it:)