Blessie is really -humanlike-ish. Doesn't want her mother to get hurt, yet sees the flaws -or non-flaws.
Milano was...certainly not sane, but definitely...gargh! There aren't any words in this blasted language! Cool might do it, but it sounds too childish. Collected, thought-provoking, dark, strange, sort of all four. Only it doesn't sound right.
I liked Blessie's nervous reaction, and her anger.
Crossbows on a hatshelf. Hee...
Just saw a couple of possible typos...'colleges', when Milano was speaking- I think you meant 'colleagues', but I'm problably wrong, and 'loose', when Blessie was thinking -I believe it should have been 'lose'. Not meaning to intrude.
Ahem, yes... Of course, those typos are changed. *scratches head* I don't know how they ended up there. Thanks for telling me. =)
Writing Cool!Milano is a lot of fun. =) And I think Blessie is my favourite MSTW. Her and Spot. And someone else, but she hasn't showed up yet. *looks secretive and stuff* Mweheheheh.
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Milano was...certainly not sane, but definitely...gargh! There aren't any words in this blasted language! Cool might do it, but it sounds too childish. Collected, thought-provoking, dark, strange, sort of all four. Only it doesn't sound right.
I liked Blessie's nervous reaction, and her anger.
Crossbows on a hatshelf. Hee...
Just saw a couple of possible typos...'colleges', when Milano was speaking- I think you meant 'colleagues', but I'm problably wrong, and 'loose', when Blessie was thinking -I believe it should have been 'lose'. Not meaning to intrude.
That duet was funny.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Writing Cool!Milano is a lot of fun. =) And I think Blessie is my favourite MSTW. Her and Spot. And someone else, but she hasn't showed up yet. *looks secretive and stuff* Mweheheheh.
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