Comments | ekwy: PPC: TM. Chapter Nine. 2/2

ekwy

PPC: TM. Chapter Nine. 2/2

Oct 16, 2005 16:42

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starsong24 October 16 2005, 15:20:55 UTC

Is that why they're on your interests list?

This section was...cute. And very 'awww'-inducing. And sweet. And, in some places, just a liiitle bit disturbing.

Which means that in places it was manically, demonically disturbing, but I didn't want to scare you.

Yes. It was good. Pity it's almost over. Ah, well.

Did Cornelia get to choose what happened to her horn?

And the mass exorcism worked well. I wondered what they were going to do.

starsong24 October 16 2005, 15:23:36 UTC

PS: I'd say something about how...something all the couples are, but I don't know how to say it.

starsong24 October 16 2005, 15:24:08 UTC

Good something, that is.

I'll stop commenting now...

ekwy October 16 2005, 15:50:33 UTC

Yep, that's why they're there. =) I didn't think anyone would notice that...

Cornelia doesn't like her horn much. She didn't want to keep it, so Dr. Fitzgerald got it as a gift. It's currently on his mantelpiece.

puredeadthingy October 16 2005, 16:04:24 UTC

Robert Picardo was brilliant in Voyager.
It's over. It really is. *sniffs* Very nice. Tight writing, nice drama, I can imagine a movie trailer to this.
Loki/Nea is very sweet.

ekwy October 16 2005, 16:15:09 UTC

Whoo! *waves a "Loki/Nea OTP!" flag around*

Well, there's still the "Extra Material" next Sunday... That's at least something. I'm really much looking forward to making all that myself. =)

puredeadthingy October 16 2005, 16:16:03 UTC

Deleted scenes? Actor's commentary? Hee ^^. I can't wait.

ekwy October 16 2005, 16:17:18 UTC

Perhaps even a trailer, and definitely a song that was written but edited out... =) It shall be fun, methinks.

elladarcy October 16 2005, 17:23:39 UTC

I like very very much.

Go, PPC!

lovefromgirl October 16 2005, 22:11:12 UTC

I loved this. Nea/Loki OTP! ;-) I did note a couple of odd syntactic bits; OTOH, you aren't a native English speaker, are you? So that's perfectly all right. Good story, good telling, and awesome song adaptations.

ekwy October 17 2005, 04:35:27 UTC

No, I'm not, and this was written a year ago, so I was young and slightly dumber. =/ Ah well, errors do occur. I'll go through it again and try and correct most of them.

Thanks!

lovefromgirl October 17 2005, 04:36:57 UTC

Not a problem, darlin'. These are just things I pick up on because I'm a language whore. If anything, now I'm wishin' I could study the differences between the languages that might've led to those particular syntax choices... *is off on linguistic tangent*