Wicked Game 4

[eklivejour]

Chapter: 4/5
Rating: R
Cast: Yunho x fictional character
Disclaimer: Purely fictional. No, I do not own him as much as I would like to.
Author’s Note: This is the result of watching Beautiful You MV and hearing that Yunho wants to be a bodyguard on Bigeast. 
Summary: Yunho is a professional bodyguard who's been hired to protect the wife of a wealthy

Comments

[inumag]

Oh
My
GOD!
I'm dead...

[yunnieily]

so i pretty much died.
that was beyond amazing.
and very well written.

[eklivejour]

haha thank you...hope u will finish reading the story :)

[lovelyjae]

She’s one wicked lady.. pardon my words but at some point, she really portrayed herself like a whore wanting her client’s attention. I wonder if she was really upset that her husband has chosen to go out on their wedding anniversary or had just conveniently used that to her advantage.

I kinda expected the sex scene to be more sensual, more torturous but this is totally unexpected. What I felt after reading was that it was based on nothing but carnal desires, only lust, no love (esp the position). Not even on Yunho’s side. It’s hard to say for the future. Anyways, it was kinda hot. Out in the open on the cover of a car boot. *drools*

This supposedly one-shot is getting very long ne? :p

[eklivejour]

he's out to vent his anger and frustration so to hell with sensuality.

yes the position was chose on purpose keke

[pinkelatta]

AH it's going to be a long comment - all the chapters together.

What he meant was that I looked obtrusive and offensive even if I didn’t try very hard.

LOLOLOLOL!

It’s bad for business, or so my boss says.

It makes me wonder who his boss is - the boss seems to have quite the impact on him in a few ways.

Aish, her life is such a miserable one. Bird in a gilded cage.

Well, at least he looked good enough to have around me all day.

Ah the beginning of all undoing. *wry smile* With such ease are hearts like ours lost to the lookers.

I wonder how he would look like when he loses his composure?

The most cool and composed guys always make us wonder that, don't they... Even the real YUnho hardly ever breaks into anything but mild discomposure.

I nearly choked on my coffee and burnt my tongue in the process. “What?!”OMO LOL~ the first sign of discomposure

[eklivejour]

she's a bitch but it seems like most of the writers like her character lol

[simplycrazy01]

wahhhhhhh!! yunho seemed to be in a rush XD
only one chapter left?! i wonder how this is gonna finish...
they dont seem to have any feelings for each other besides sexual attraction....

[eklivejour]

actually i have already posted chp 5...just haven't posted it on hug yet :)

maybe u will get a better understanding of their relationship in that chp :)

[simplycrazy01]

really??? where did u post it?? XD me wanna go read XD

[eklivejour]

it's on my journal but u need to friend me cos I friend locked it :)